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for The Seal of Konoha

by abomination34

person Anon
schedule September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
My one gripe is that I hardly think a scared villager would be quite so eloquent while narrating how he witnessed some guy in the street kill himself.
person Clemen
schedule September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for updating so fast. Very much appreciated. Hope you update soon. Take care and god bless.
person Anna
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow. so good!!I really want to read more! Please update soon!!
person KatamariKid
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like too!! sO sad! please update!
person chibitalon
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I agree wholeheartedly! One the best Intros i've ever read!
person Anon
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
.....damn. made me cry. You better bring Naruto back or i'll kill youuu!! Seriously that was amazing! Keep going!
person Mija
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg you cant just LEAVE it there!!!! noooooooooooos my Naru baby is Dead, nooooossss...you made me cry darn it, I mean really, the description of the way this cloud of utter misery and fear gripped everyones heart, and the way Tsunade just KNEW by the tears in her eyes as she ran to the source, and ooh my gosh Sakura and iruaka, and Hinata too, but the other two are much closer to Naru that it had to hurt like being gutted..and Sasuke screamed?? ok I officially have tears running down my eyes, seriously, and who is this demon wearing a friends face?/ please write more please please please??? must have more, soo sad but need to know, huggles and watery tears Mija...:-(
person dancingkitsune
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was sad........
person dancingkitsune
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*sorry, forgot to say it was good as well, and to please update soon....
person Anon
schedule September 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow...just wow...please update soon this is awsome!