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November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Kawaii!!!!
I'm a happy ending sucker, and this is certainly one!!
I'm a happy ending sucker, and this is certainly one!!
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November 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
/drool... /drool..../more drool.... Ok, that was just freakin hot!! Awesome smex! and damn funny too!!
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November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dude, that was a cute and not to mention awsomely cute fanfic. Puleeeeeeeeeezzzz write a chapter 2 for it man! It so rocked! Make it super duper extra smutty okay!? Sasuke-kun is so cute here, (hint: I'm a Sasuke fangirl...hehe.) okay, that's all I can write for now...please continue, you're a fantastic writer!
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October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just knew they would be caught!!!
Lol I was laughing so hard with the last part that I almost felt out of the chair.
Ohhhhhhhh Naruto is so going to pay for embarass Sasuke that bad, would Sasuke make Naruto scream so hard that the whole village will hear him, I wish so!! It will be perfect payback
Lol I was laughing so hard with the last part that I almost felt out of the chair.
Ohhhhhhhh Naruto is so going to pay for embarass Sasuke that bad, would Sasuke make Naruto scream so hard that the whole village will hear him, I wish so!! It will be perfect payback
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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes the story is smoking but you really need to fix the typo of 'prostrate'. Prostrate means to lie down, the word you seek is prostate (no extra 'r'). It kind of kills the heat just a little.
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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ha, poor sasuke... he's never going live that one down. oh well, he needs to loosen up anyway. great job. hope u update soon, cause i love this one-shots. oh and thanks for reviewing my story!
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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this is WOW!! it just WOW! you to update and soon this is WOW, i mean WOW plz this is great and this is the longest review i have even writen so this tillsyou that this is WOW plz update soon
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October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
XD
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October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, really good lemons! Can't wait to read the next chapter it sounds tempting!
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October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update this, i love this story.