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by BishounenKrazed

person libriandragon
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
waterfalls... oh the possibilities!!!
person Yuri
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay, special chapter!
it's so hot, i like it.
the next is fun with waterfalls!? OMG! i'm lookig forward to . please update soon.
person evilchild (not signed in)
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love you! I'm just giddy with all the NaruSasu goodness I'm reading!!! I can't wait for an update!!!
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The story is good and all, and I'm not one for denying lemons, but a back story could have been nice. I always like to see a relationship build instead of going from no relationship to sex.... I still like the story and I look forward to the next chapter ^^
person YaoiLover D.J.
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OOh I like it lots a lot :). Smutty lemon PLEASE XD!!
person Noah
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a way to blackmail your readers to reviw if we want to get a second chapter! That is just so....mm...forget that. Are you writing the second chap? You better! It is a nice side of Naruto that we dont get to see in the anime yet...i hope it get incorporated in future chapters though. I mean the mature well thinking and powerful Naruto.
person Ana
schedule September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Its good! Please write more!
person Libriandragon
schedule September 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i feel sorry for Kyuubi...sort of. lol. Its a good thing Naruto chose to withdraw. Now he wont have to worry about killing a friend.
person Hiei Jaganshi Urameshi
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*begs* please smutty lemons!!!

Its a great fic! You should be proud of yourself!
person Yuri
schedule September 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You must continue! I loved it SO MUCH.