rate_review Reviews

i liked it! especially the ending. ^^

a couple of the chapters got messed up.. >>' so i was all like. confused. but.. it's all good.
it was sexy and cute all at once. and it's like. over. and that's *sad* xD *hugs you* but it was awesome!


<3

I know you said that the metal was the problem for Kurama, but it doesn't make any sense for him to be bad at thrown weapons. In the show Kurama throws his sharpened roses very much like shirken. He should be used to the movements needed at least.

*giggles* that was great! .. hah! >> he gave kazuma a haircut! >> he SO deserved that one.... .. hehe


...*heartbubbles at the deviousness of kurama and orochimaru-sama*...

ooooohh.. and the plot thickens!!

..and i totally say Orochimaru-sama's obsession is sexy. >> but you TOTALLY knew that. hehe.. ^^



yep. you have SO got a facinating story. i would honestly say more, but i can hardly think straight. so..sadly...that's the best you get today. but i did try! i did really like the whole itachi-akatsuki thing. but i think instead of babbling on and on.. i'll just sleep. ^^ later!

>> i almost feel bad for Koenma... but at least someone's trying to win his affections. ^^


as for shuichi.. that just totally sucks for him. >> though.. i don't know if it would be better if it was in more detail or not.. xD but it was a plot twist i should have seen coming. .. >> heh. ^^

well that was an interesting, sexy chapter. o o


lots of questions answered... and even more questions from those answers. i loved it. heh. ^^

and YAY FOR THE SEXY SNAKE MAN! ^ ^ hehe.



awesome chapter. >> god awful intriguing uchihas.... xD

hehe.. silly Koenma. but..as silly as that was, it was a genious idea. o o and that name was brilliant too, Clonabara. ^ ^

and that whole thing with Tsunade. *smirks and claps*



but oooohh... Orochimaru-sama chapter!! >> it made my heart warm. xD that's good, right? lol. ^ ^

it was so..adorable. i *loved* it. i don't know any other way to call it.. or say it. heh. ^_^


>> and for your ficcage-ness.. thank you! ^.^ i would gladly be graced by a one-shot of yours. i've been dying for some JiraiyaxOrochimaru. it's so hard to find. sexy crack pairing. xD >> right.. you had a sort of set up.. and i'm messing it all up. xD so how about this:

i would love you even more if you would write a lemony oneshot of Jiraiya molesting his sexy Orochimaru-uke. Bondage is very sexy, so are knives and bloodplay and candlewax. It can end any way your mind thinks up. So long as it's after the lemon ends. :p ^ ^ *heartbubble* and yes, i would love you more. because i still would bake you chocolate cookies. ^~


and happy thanksgiving!

I'm a terrible fan. I read this story whenever you post an update and don't review. My brain shuts down when ever I try to think of something to write for you. I can say, I do enjoy your writings. And I am going to try to be a better fan and review alot more than in the future. Have a Happy Thanksgiving.

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yay for Uchihas! .. yay for Orochimaru + the sexy kitsune! lol. yay sexy snake man... >>


i liked the chapter. it was way different, but in a totally good way. i thought it was neat. ^^
and the end part with Orochimaru and Shuichi was .. adorable? ^^

oh wow. o o

sexy.. *heartbubbles* shackles are good, too... >>


haha.. i don't even remember what chapter 17 was anymore. xD
but i know i liked it! xD xD xD

i should go back and read it again.

nope.. wait. i remember Gaara. the trade thing was cool. ^^ and the Lee moment with him dragging him off was cute. >> ^^

but damn! that was so awesome.. *giggles* yay for the sexy uke Orochimaru! ^^ i SO love you for that. >> ^^

... he's just *too* sexy like that ... and it's just.. *not* written... anywhere near enough.. >> hahha. but i'll shut up now. ^^