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by Scottishfae

person missy
schedule March 7, 2013 at 12:00 AM
'Twas cute! I liked how matter-of-fact Sasuke was about calling out from under the desk before Kakashi and Iruka left. They got *this* close to fooling Iruka until he did that. ;) I also liked that they didn't do more than a BJ as well. Full-on sex at the office is a huge turn-off for me. (Your coworkers shouldn't have to carry around a black light to inspect the furniture before sitting down for a meeting with you, amirite?) You did a good job keeping Naruto and Sasuke in-character, I thought. I liked that they still had a competitive streak to their relationship, despite being romantically involved. :D
person Yuri
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's awesome! Great work!!
please please more!
person miyoko-chan
schedule September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was soooo hot, i loved it. Kudos for making it NARU/SASU.

kawaii_aikurushii_kitsune@hotmail.com
person aria
schedule September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
>"Loser has to bottom."
>Sasuke put on a burst of speed.

i love especially this line.
so, which is bottm? i want to know. i hope it will be NaruSasu...
very well written, i like your writing style.
you should continue this, please? keep up the great work!

person akume
schedule September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome. Maa, poor Iruka's going to be scared for life. Anyway, thanks for the read. Ja.
person Zrina
schedule September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very yummy :) Had me smiling at poor little innocent Iruka hehe!! Very well done!