rate_review Reviews

I don't remember what your first summary, but if I hadn't already read this story I wouldn't have read it based on its current summary.

Whoah... That was... HOT 0.o OMB MOREEE!!

I laughed when Sasuke fainted. Good work.

This was so awesome. When I read the discription of Sasuke being the "school slut", I was pretty aprehensive. But this was such a cute ficlet. Great Job.

Don't write smut. Ever again.




...I'm afraid that if I read another one of your lemons that I will die from a sensory overload. 8D

JESUS, that was so hot that I feel as if I should look for burn marks. And OMG.. I love how this keeps originality with the pairing and smut and everything! It's genius! And I love NaruSasu (even though who's uke and seme really don't matter to me)! JESUS I'm giving you 15 out of 10.

(You get extra points for the side!fuck, lol. :D)

Please tell me that you will write more....................please....please......pleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease.PLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLEASEPLASEPLASEPLASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Lol i just realy like it............(Cleaning nose bleed). ^_~
Kisses
PS
PLEASE UPDATE THIS STORRY!

i got one of those fluffy , feel good feelings in my gut while reading this. -punches stomach- it was hot and sexy... then it got sweet and cute. perfect combination.

loved it.

-innerchild

first of all, let me just say that i love you for making it a NARU/SASU fic. You don't see many of those around.
this story was sooo hot it gave me goosebumps. i don't think i've ever read anthing this hot before. As always
your stories never disappoint me. all i can really say is keep writing because you have amazing talent. Wonderful story!!!!!

kawaii_aikurushii_kitsune@hotmail.com

OMG OMG OMG OMG this was so effing hot. I usually dislike NaruSasuNaru cuz the pairing's so overrated but this was so worth reading and I'm glad I clicked on the story there must be a sequel because there is so much more you can do with this and 12 billion thumbs up to you for making SasUKE cuz slutSasuke is my very favorite. GREAT JOB!!!

Oh sweet Jesus!!!
That was....
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I'm breathless, wordless, pantless.....
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...That was HOT!!! FREAKING HOT!!!

Hot is not the right word for that!!! It doesn't give it enough justice I think!!
You know what I mean?!?!
It was a great idea for a ONE SHOT... but you know US readers, we want more. But I like it as a one shot, if you don't write anymore. I was kind of wondering what kind of story this was, because the summary didn't do it justice. The summary should read something like this, "SUPER HOT SHOWER SCENE, MIND BLOWING BLOW JOBS AND SUPER HOT, WET BED SCENE!!!! XXX-SMUTT!!!!" Now that would give you some kind of idea of what to expect!!!!

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just a little thought....

~evil smile~
~Shosuro~