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for The Boy Next Door

by kaesaku

schedule July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Lovely story so far! So cute and fluffy!!! great job even while struggling with real life! Hats off to you, girl! You can really build believable characters!
schedule July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story you got there. I especially like the way you portray Naruto.
Keep up the amazing work and please update in the near future ^_~
schedule July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good ending to the chapter!
XD I like this story. I wasn't expecting it to be this when I saw it, but this is just as good!
Can't wait for another chapter!
XD LANE
person Anon
schedule July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow. amazing story!!!

i hope its naruto seme. good job.
person Dragon7
schedule July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!!!!!!!! I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
schedule July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Can't wait until the next chapters comes.
Keep up with the good work and good luck!
Take care. Hugs
person qwerty
schedule July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
AWWW! Loved the end of that chapter!!
Promising story!
update!
person SasUke28
schedule July 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAAAAAAAAAY, kiss! Awww, Sasuke is such a cute jeally! XD, keep up the good work, this fic is filling out nicely! Update when you can, I know what it feels like to be a single-mother, I am the daughter of one and had to help out with family issues for mom! XD, good luck!
person lindsey
schedule May 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a good story!
The idea's different in a way. ^__^
Sasuke running after a car is one of the funniest things I can imagine!
Can't wait till the next chapter!!

BTW If you're still looking for a beta, I'd be happy to help. My email is masquerade1015450@yahoo.com
or my aol sn is dona948.
schedule May 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story! May i place my name in the beta search hat? I am currently working for 2 other people, but it's nothing to me. O0000k0o and i tend to send back the finished product within 2-12 hours(depends what time i have to work).