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for Into The Desert

by kyubiteaser

schedule June 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Plz you gotta write more its hard to find a really good NaruHina fic thats not just all smut...even though smut is good lol but its a wonderful story and i hope you don't stop writing cus if you do... sweet lil kyubi or shukaku might just wound up...'missing' *evil smile* but that won't happen if you keep making Hinata smile and continue writing this fic :)
person statnin
schedule October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey
what happened here? I was just gettin into the new series
givin up have u? damn owellit was SOOO Awesome! well done
person modoken
schedule April 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon, and I read them both. Whole passages have been copied.
schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please Teaser UPDATE, i dont want to seem like a nagger but please oh god please update your story i want to know what happens
person modoken
schedule September 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
when will this update again? this was the first real series i read on tonfa that was not just smut. I would be very happy if it got updated.
person modoken
schedule May 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
will this ever be updated?
schedule March 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great story but when are u gonna continue it?
schedule March 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok it has been over 2 month now so when are you going to update it seems like you only update one chapter once every other month so damn UPDATE THE STORY PLEASE IT IS A PRETTY GOOD STORY COME ON AND UPDATE FOR CRYING OUT LOUD
schedule February 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please....... have mercy on us..... no more pain. please update....please..... *sobs*....... :)
schedule February 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like your story but I have a question and that is when are you going to update this story its beenover 2 months since it has been updates last so come on and update it please