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for Into The Desert

by kyubiteaser

schedule February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This chapter brought a lot of things into perspective. Is this the girl that the boy from the wagoneer train bought this necklace for? If it is, I feel so sorry for her. Well I can't wait until the next chapter, thank you.
schedule January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Man i hate waiting for the new chapter. I feel like im going to jump out of my skin. PLEASE HURRY MAN!
Love the story keep it going strong
person Draphonix
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great start to the next installment. Cant wait till the next chapters are up. Keep up the good work
person Ginyuki Kitsune
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well... my most sincere and deepest apologies.
I never reviewed you for this chapter!
I just realized (After reading it for the fourth time)!

Great story, and a very good chapter as well.
Keep up the good work, and keep looking good!

Sincerely,

Ginyuki Kitsune
person Josh
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey Teaser hope to hear from you soon. I like the update and I am glad you found the time to do so.. I hope to hear from you and see another update and hope you get the time to do so.. I have a question for you if you e-mail me at JTB8834@aol.com
person Fan
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Um.... kinda late to be asking but... what is the pairing for this fic. I know Naruhina definatly (right?) but right now, I am just... confused...
Anyways, awsome chap as always. Can't wait for the next one
You rock Teaser!!!
person spiritwolf
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well this chapter was ok and hll it was abot damn time you finally decided to update this story oh well atleast you did update I guess I can wait yet another month or two for next one in the mean time there are alot of other betterstories ot there to read so update sooner then later
person logophobia
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
a review hiku:

mystery and awe
fills the kyubiteaser's
amazing story

a cool unique voice
guides the story like a ship
sailing swiftly on

cliff hangers kill me
when she stops at the worst times
i become annoyed

every new chapter
always promises greatness
and delivers it

i love fanfiction
because the tales woven
are often so great

when i chose the best
the author above the rest
kyubiteaser
person Plo KoonXK16
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice. Can't wait for the next one.
person Allys
schedule December 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hi I love how your story is coming along, you always have some awesome plot twist, I like Suki, and I hope that she really does tturn out to be Naruto's sister he needs some family love in his life. But speaking of family, Yondaime's name is ARashi it means storm, which is cute since Naruto means maelstrom and Uzumaki means whirlpool hence the swirly symbol, just a heads up.