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for Into The Desert

by kyubiteaser

person Robert
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your Into the...series however one thing has recently struck me. From what I can tell, unless I missed something, Naruto hasn't told Hinata about the Kyuubi. However, they have had sex multiple times. Wouldn't she have gotten suspicious about the seal on his stomach?
person preston
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gomenize Sempai-Sama thank you most dearly for continuing your great work. and it truly is a great work. I see all to often the hacks and the noobs strugaling to write to express, your work ... your work is soulful as in when i read it i feel my very soul overflowing I have rarly felt this content after reading anything. this is the best fanfic that i have ever read. Its hilarius thought provoking tear inducing and gives me goose flesh every other paragragh
A-hem now on to buissness now although i'd love to see naruto win your upcoming grand battle if he faces off against hinata he has to lose there is no other way ooooh maybe you are the one the one who could come up with a way for naurto to learn how to transform into kubi not nesisarily in giant form but a smaller version and then to channel both Kubi's mind and chakra so that their fighting as one and then maybe kage-bushin no jutshi with greatest love and respect.
P.S plz come out with the next chapter soon
person NightEye
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I can not get enough of this series! Really good. Only problem is knowing when to use "to" and "too". other than that, everythings great! I can't wait for the next chapter!
person Josh
schedule December 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey Kyuubi-Teaser... Dropping by to say hi and love your writings like always and hope to see another update from you.. Do you know if your story is up to be voted for for the Narutofic.org if so let me know and Iwill vote for you cuz this is a great story and e-mail me when you can JTB8834@aol.com
person ......
schedule December 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update
person veyron_ fan
schedule December 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
read into the woods and this in no time, the story is so interesting. Plzz hurry and update lol.
person naruhinalover2009
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG i love this story its so awesome! please email me at maroon5slady@yahoo.com when u update cuz im dyin for the next chapter!!!!!
person Alex
schedule December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your stories are absolutely amazing, i read them all in one go and i have to say that they are some of the most well written of all the stories on this site. Keep up the good work.
person golden kyuubi chibi
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yaaaay best story evers!!!!!! AMAZING i would be sayng this on ff.net but stupid thing wouldnt let mw log in to review :'( oh well i love your story almost as much as fluffy kitsune plushies...almost well love it all of it nice doin this cya :D
person Darkstar
schedule November 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woohoo!! More NaruHina-ey goodness!!!

Too be honest I haven't found myself as enthralled in "Desert" as I found myself in "Woods", but I think i'll get there....I just have to convince myself to stop needlessly skipping ahead when I find myself bored...

Still, A++. You do your job, and you do it well! :D