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November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that these chapters just keep getting better and better. Keep up the good work.
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November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well I thought this chapter was good about time you updated ok well please next time don`t bore ppl with the junk you wrote before your finally and I mean finally got to the story PLEASE don`t take as long to update as yo did this chapter its a good story
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November 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it was smuty!!! yay raven will be elated!
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November 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good so far, but would like to see the ending, wouldn't mind seeing the ending.
Although, the thing with the woman at the end, I'm betting that she is either a victim of Orichimaru right?
Try throwing in a couple unexpected twists into the story. Other than that good writing so far. Into the woods was great, but as I said you still need to finish Into the Sand. Maybe throw in a oc that can move gravity or something like that, maybe a guy that has a multiple personality disorder with chakra and moves with each personality, play around with those ideas if you want, although in my own story on fanfiction.net I am going to be introducing characters like that, just throwing some ideas out there for you to work with, I got more.
Well as I said. FINISH THE STORY you haven't touched it since october while the last time you updated Into the Woods was on the 6th.
Although, the thing with the woman at the end, I'm betting that she is either a victim of Orichimaru right?
Try throwing in a couple unexpected twists into the story. Other than that good writing so far. Into the woods was great, but as I said you still need to finish Into the Sand. Maybe throw in a oc that can move gravity or something like that, maybe a guy that has a multiple personality disorder with chakra and moves with each personality, play around with those ideas if you want, although in my own story on fanfiction.net I am going to be introducing characters like that, just throwing some ideas out there for you to work with, I got more.
Well as I said. FINISH THE STORY you haven't touched it since october while the last time you updated Into the Woods was on the 6th.
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November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved into the woods, and it looks like the greatness will continue. I hope to see an update soon-John
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October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Huzah greatness in a story. I loved the work that you did in both Forest and Desert, keep up the amazingly awesome work!
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October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Stupid Clifie :P Great story! Keep it up.
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October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Alright, so I'm not usually one to take the time for a review, but this was a great chapter. The story itself was little more than an intro for things to come obviously, but the way you handled the characters to get them to that point was fun. I loved "Forest" and I have a feeling "Desert" will be equally enjoyable. Thanks for the memories!
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Omg my new favourite Fanfic right now! Keep up the awesome work!...... Is it(the girl) Rin?
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I managed to read all the chaptors of Into the Woods in a day, quite some time ago and was completey absorbed into it. The next part you've started gives me the exact same feelings. Thing is, is the girl at the end of chaptor two have any connection to the girl in the beginning of chapter one? I don't understand who those characters were or what their purpose is but i hope you fill us (and of course me) in on it. Please continue on with this story to the end, i couldn't stand it if you didn't. Thank you for writing such a kick-ass story.