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for Into The Desert

by kyubiteaser

person Snidne
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
One word:

Genius.

Enough said. xD Ok maybe not enough. Really good chapter this one too. I like your style.

......Yeah ok, I'm done. XD Not much to say that already isn't said.

Snidne out.
person Fay
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ACK!!! Sooo good!!! Can NOT wait for more! Plot twist and mystery already, romance in full bloom again! *squeals happily*

LUFFS IT! Waiting for an update with baited breath!

^,^
person preston
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More plz plz MORE you are the best fewer then five series have ever made me this exited this is one of the best series that i have ever read it's helarius oh and i LOVED that opening disclamer you did in the first chapter if you ever dicide to turn this into a official fanfic book then i would like to reserve my copy now and lastly i would like to thank you this is beautiful i've read so of the other shorts on this site and none of them do there charactors as well as you do
person Josh
schedule October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well that was a great update and I will be glad to see another update soon.. But if you don't update I understand from work and school... Well Talk to you later.. E-mail me cuz I want to know a few things at JTB8834@aol.com or RedDragonSTL19@yahoo.com either one will do
person Plo KoonXK16
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wonderful! Keep up the good work.
person nonengel
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice chapter, i liked the bets regarding hinata's reaction
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. I'll be watching this one. ^_^
person logophobia
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GO TEASER!!!!
person Legilmyth
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it love it love it!!!!!!!!! It was definitily worth the wait! So this new person sounds like hse will bring some interesting happenings to the plot. I await with bated breath.
person Farukh
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Really good chapter. The way naruto returned was a nice idea. The ending had me a little confused though, I cant seem to understand that last part. But I guess more will be explained in the coming chapters. Great storyline in this chapter and I cant wait for the next chapter to be up. Hope its up soon.

Farukh.