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for Into The Desert

by kyubiteaser

person JasonC
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
freakin awsome. You haven't lost your touch, you chapters are as amasing as always. I only found one or two grammar problems but after I read the sentence again I found that they are only of the utmost minor. But I really can not wait to see the next chapter. I just know it is going to be awsome. And what the hell are they doing to the poor girl huh??!! Well its probaly major to do with the story so Ill just keep on guessing until you come out with a new chapter. So seeya when you do.
person Dra_cenah
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i'd easily say this is teh best ever fanfic ever written, u keep up the amazing work.. and p.s I am stalking u in the most innocent way posible *hides behind chibi kyuubi*
person Tobis
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
By far the greatest series I've ever seen and by far my most often visited in hopes of updates. My vote on possible 'intruders' at this point are down to this: Naruto (never know), Sasuke (call it a wild guess), Neji, Kakashi, or Iruka. My money is on either Naruto or Neji.
person spiritwolf
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really loved your first story Into the Woods and nw this story I knw I will love it to I was confused at first wondering who are these ppl but now I know but who is this girl with him oh well please update soon
person Plo KoonXk16
schedule October 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love it. i looks to be just as good if not better than the first
person Legilmyth
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it! What a great way to start off the new story! I love that Naruto got her a dragon, it totaly suits her.
Any way I will be waiting patiantly for your next chapter, happy writing=^-^=
person JasonC
schedule October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gahhhrr. Upload next chapter soon....olease grahrg. Must read more...........
person Farukh
schedule October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Again i will say and it will agfain be not enough. An amazing beginning to a very promising sequal. I cant wait for the next chapter to be up. The place where you left that cliffhanger is a killer. Man oh man, I doubt i'll be able to sleep tonight or the next night peacfully until i get to read the next chapter. Man, i hope its up really really soon. From and really devoted fan of your work.

Farukh
person WS
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Now that's just down right cruel, stopping at a place like that. It seems to be going good so far, so don't stop- or else. Or else what you might ask, i don't know at the moment, but I'll think of something that makes a really good 'Or Else' sooner or later.
person charliette-angel-115
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you don't know how long i waited for this... gawd... ur realy very good. I started reading into the woods months ago and i loooooooooooove it. i hope that u'll update very soon.