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Oh my, weird, I read the A/N for the last chapter, like not the chapter that is the A/N but the last written chapter... and what's weird is how I stopped reading this cuz it suddenly did the downtime thing and I was saying to an author friend how I was going to email you and say the exact same thing that you said to all of us... strange...and I'm gonna kick Mirandler for not telling me about this story. I hope your block isn't too bad, it sounds like this story is a pretty good way for you to vent, and you may or may not realize that it gives your story a special quality. Special is vague, but there isn't another word for it. It's got a lot of feeling in it... and it's not just angst. And I think that's what I like the best. I was just kind of thinking how I like how it's kind of haphazard. I'm not saying you don't seem like you have a plan for this story, but just that ... the funeral for example... I mean, it's not necessarily relevant and it is, what did we learn out of it? We see Jiraiya, and Naruto's mom is vulnerable/emotional... but it was just like... writing life, you know? Bleh. That didn't make sense. And I'm finding that as much as I love Naruto's POVs in this because there's so much going on, I really really love Sasuke with every chapter. And the last chapter, from the shower scene on was really touching. But yeah I suppose all hell is gonna break loose, but if all else fails at least Naruto can go to his uncle's. And I wonder what will happen w/ Sakura and Hinata... now that I finished I can go to bed! Hope you had a nice holiday! ^_^

I wasn`t gonna reveiw until I got to chap 5, but somethin` really got to me.

Ok, I`m a Christian and proud of it. DON`T GET ME WRONG! THIS IS NOT A FLAME! I PROMASIE! But If I were to ever meet Naruto`s dad I would say, "what do u think of gays and lesbians?" if he were to say that it was a sin or some other shit I would punch him in tha face. Then get out the bible and read the part where God wants us to find love. If he were to read a part where it said that it is a sin (which is in the old testiment) I would bitch slap him with tha bible. And say, "No duh! I`m straight and I was born a sinner! God knows we`er gonna sin. He knows exactly what sin we`er gonna make. Your a Christian! You belive that God knows all and we`ll forgive and loves us no matter what! ANd anyways that`s in the old testiment stupid! We use that to make desions! But the old testiment is over! We don`t make sacricfies any more no do we? No! That`s because He The ALl powerful one payed tha price! We`er free stupid! We can like the oppiste ex or the same sex. We just have to offer our selfs up to him! He loves us no matter if we like the same gender! I swear! Your so ignorent!" and the punch he just for good mesure one more time.

Sorry, for the rant. That just pisses me off. If you read the bible you would know god wants us to find love. He knows what we`er gonna do before we`er even born, So he just wants us to ask for forgiveness. That`s how it comes out to me. BUT, yea. I like your story so far! ^-^ It`s really good and well writen! I was just so pissed at his dad. Cause to me he gives Christians a bad name. So like I said I really like it! update soon!

~Angel

P.S: If something bad happeneds to Naru`s dad plz put a person in there that comes up and points and laughs at him in his face then walks off! ^-^ Cause that`s excatly what I would do! and it would be funny!

I agree with you 100% on the part with Naruto's dad.

Where he discriminates males but not females. i go through that every day... Boys wanting to kill gays but not lesbians. its so retarded.

But Wonderful story nontheless. =3

It made me smile

I liked it, and I can totally help with the government questions! let me know what you need!

so yah I had this whole rant typed out, but then i wasnt sure if i should post it, but after reading ur other reviews, neh, here goes nothing:

yeah, religion. I so totaly live in the bible belt, where there is every church in the world. I HATE IT!!!!!!!! OMG i swear if i have one more person come up to me and give me the gay marriage debate one more time i am going to rip their heads off!!!!! Personally if they have a problem with it, than just give it an differnt F***ing name! the bible says (dont ask how i know this, never read the thing) that marriage is a union between two people. its the constitution that stated that marriage is between a man and a woman, and its the only one out there that says it to, because I know for sure that the german law book has no mention of a specific sex, nor the italian or the french, stinkin british and their old rulers. Now im not saying im gay, although almost all of my friends are, i personaly like the opposite sex way to much. but these issues bug me! I mean why cat they addopt? because thats what I am going to do, I believe that one needs to take care of the children already on this earth before bringing in more that could suffer the same fate. and as for my church, after the priest pulled a shotgun on my friend for taking a walk through the parkinglot ( the church is in my neighborhood, yeah like 6 houses down) at about 7 or 8 at night, it was still light out mind you. I opted for NOT going there anymore. we had the same sermons there to and they bug me. but yah government? I love government! if you have any questions about it let me know! sorry about the rant but things, like the ones ur talking about, piss me off.

if i offended anyone im sorry, im just a german who was always to told to fight for what they believed in. please disregard if you do not agree. thanx
dace

I KNEW IT WAS ONE OF THEM THAT SLAMED ON THE BRAKES!!! Oh, I'm good xD And greatful for Naruto's sake that she didn't tell Arashi O.o;;;

I love this fic so much, good luck with the next chapter!!

ah, i'm loving this story. the way you're approaching these issues is really well done in my opinion. i also like that you're doing things a bit differently for each character's back story, than what is normally done. that's refreshing. um, there's a lot i wanted to say but having read 5 chapters in one go i forgot a lot of my comments :p but i liked what you said/naruto thought about being surrounded by people but still feeling alone and what caused that feeling.. it was simple but really insightful and so true

anyway, like i said, loving it, keep it up.. i like the way things are developing between the boys (the part in this chapter--ch. 5--with sasuke realizing he liked cuddling was so sweet to me ^_^) and also i like the bits about sakura (the fact she and hinata obviously have feelings for each other and naruto is friends with/has past "experience" with neji makes me curious about future run-ins) eep but now that naru's mom saw him kiss sasuke, i wonder how long she'll hold off telling his dad and what will happen in the meantime *bites nails*

~ lg

Oooh. Nice story >< I was reading all five chapters so far at once and when I finished I was like damn, no more chapters XD Keep it up

Oh hey Whoot for agnostic people! (I'm one as well) Yeah... I would kind of like to have a religion but... yeah... I personally really am not to happy with the christian community. The whole their way or the highway thing. (Yeah only some but still.)

ANYWAYS!!! Enough religious talk. So far I really like your story. Its very interesting and I haven't had to stop at a mispelled or bad grammered word. ^^ The plot is great as well! I really can't wait to read more. Thankfully there are still a few chapters before I get left off at either a finished story, or a clifhanger... or just a spot where you left off that is a good place to leave off yet still leaves the reader wanting more. xD

Ooooh.... you left it at a cliffhanger... how did I know D=

please update as soon as your able to. ^^ I hope you have a wonderful thanksgiving!