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for Where is God?

by Innerchild

person Nomme de Plume
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hn, both of us seem to think our latest chapters are crap. well, people have told me mine's not, and so here i am to tell you that yours is soooooo not crap. i mean, come on. sasuke and naruto moving forward in the emotion dept. and his mom seeing them kissing (so did not see that coming, btw). and, she can't handle it?! seriously, i hope that the love for her son outweighs her need to agree with everything her husband believes, omg. though, if naruto's dad finds out and kicks him out of the house, i'm sure he could stay with jiraiya or even sasuke. or maybe sakura and protect her from her drunken father...

okay, sometimes my mind runs away from me. anyway, again, great chapter. i'm so looking forward to your update!
person AnA La Pana83
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter. I'm hoping that Naruto maintains his backbone and Sasuke will be there for him since it seems like the s**t is really gonna hit the fan soon! Don't worry bout the writer's block. The best method is having something warm to drink and sitting yourself in front of the keyboard and typing whatever crap comes to mind. The miracle of editing it later is always a blessing. Happens to me alot. Can't wait for the next chap. Good work.
person chelzi
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oo-ooo-ooh! ~_~ eheheh... his mommy sawed them. NOT good... but brilliant. of course she saw them. they were asking for it, making out on a street corner like that! DUH!! naru, what did you THINK would happen, huh? oh well... i hope everything works out! sasuxnaru is SO gooey-squish-ness! ^_^ please update soon! i can't wait to see what happens next!~
person Meemei
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh! So his Mom was the one who slammed the brakes! Ahh-ha! That was good. I was thinking somthing like that. Cool...
person Akuma Sora
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! I love this fic. I also feel the same way you do. I love how you write. It somehow seems right. I hope you lose the writers block and continue on with this fic. It's really great and I love it. *hearts*
person Anon
schedule October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awesome, keep up the good work
person Carla
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I only ask that you do not let Sasuke be hurt again bu Naruto's actions;i.e. like letting Naruto get it on with Nejii. That would be very hard on Sasuke as previous actions and thoughts have shown this. Lwt this fic be only a Naruto/Sasuke thing , everyone else with whoever they want be it in a solo, couple, threesome, gang, whatever but Sasuke and Naruto are exclusive to each other. Nejii lost his chance when he decided to hook up with Gaara so let him wallow on that and not try anything funny with Naruto.
Thanks for the story and dont forget to update asap!

Carla
person Kaminari
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yo...I love this story..i dont like naruto's dad very much..what an asshole..T_T..i thought for a second his mom was crying cuz they found out that naruto was gay but i reread it. well anyways, good story, and keep updating it..^_^
person AnA La Pana83
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woah, angst like a motha. Anyway, it was good though for story plot reasons i imagine. I just hope Sasuke can understand what Naruto is dealing with and they help each other out. And sides, Naruto needs to get over Neji already, i mean he has Sasuke there, HELLO! I just hope Sasuke will be there before Naruto does something stupid. Update soon!
person Anon
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
don't get less motivated!! keep writing (please), i really like it!