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for Where is God?

by Innerchild

schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey there! I have no idea if I have reviewed yet for this story or not. If I haven't, my apologies. I'm enjoying your story so far. I like that it is dealing with religion and it's inherent controversies. It seems we share the same opinion on the issues you have brought up. I don't have to try very hard to understand where Naruto is coming from; Naruto's family is my family. You're doing a good job with the religious side of things so far. I would have trouble not getting to controversial with it, but you seem to be doing fine.

Constructive crit: There were a few grammatical/punctuation/spelling errors. I'm very, very anal about stuff like that. If you ever want someone just to look over your stuff before you post I would be more than happy to do it. Seriously, I'm such a nerd. I get really excited when I edit. ... So anyways, the offer is there if you want. :)

Good luck with the next chapter!
person Psylocke
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It always brings a giddy smile to my lips when I see this fic updated!
Never cared much for Hinata, but her situation in your fic is a little intriguing. :)

as for Sasuke.....you did some great writing for his flashback scenes.

although...you shouldn't demand for more reviews. People tend to get less anxious to do so if the author demands it. :)
person Hypnotic
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've really been enjoying this so much. I meant to review a while ago, just never got around to it. But man, its great I like the relationship between Sasuke and Naruto. I wanna see how that turns out. Also if Naruto will tell Neji how he feels....crazy man. I hope you keep updating this story.

Word.
person Sekre
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hm, wonder what Naratu is being all crabby about. As for the reviews, you could probably get more people reading your fic with a less-confusing summary...I was sort of hesitant myself to read this fic cause of the summary - but maybe that's just me. Lovely chapter by the way.
person Nomme de Plume
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow, what the hell's wrong with naruto? and all the little mysteries are starting to come out, ne? i liked this chapter, though it has left me jusy _dying_ for more. can't wait for your next update.
person aria
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG, i love your Naruto, Sasuke and Sakura...
i like your writing style.
keep up the good work! please more!!
person chelzi
schedule October 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh... that's sad. is he gonna see jiraiya at the funeral? jiraiya seems semi-important. since he's, y'know, different from the rest of the family. but yeah. stupid naru and sasuke fighting. they're being dumb. i love this story, and i want you to update as soon as you can! but i understand the whole school thing. i'm having my worst year ever so far, and it's freaking the hell outta me. i'd go into detail, but you probably don't care... anywho! update asahp!! (as soon as humanly possible) lovers!!~
person Psylocke
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this fic keeps making me more interested with every chapter!

good job!! :D
person chelzi
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
grr... i hate naruto's dad! i hate him SOOOO much!! he's so...STUPID!!! gawd, i hate him! he sucks... i love sasuke-kun though, and naruto. and i like the way sakura is portrayed in this. but i really hate... all their parents in this. but that's okay...
please update soon! i like this story, and i REALLY wanna know who just caught them!! WHO WAS IT??!?!!!!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!?!?!!?!?!?!? ...yeah... so please update!~
person Exotic Rose83
schedule October 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Liked it alot! Interesting back subject as well, religion. Anyway, i hope Sasuke and Naruto manage to find some solace together. Do i sense some angst here should Naruto's parents find out?? Tight work!