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for Where is God?

by Innerchild

person Dawnofmyheart
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it its really good so far update soon!!
person chelzi
schedule September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NOOO!!! SOMEBODY BURN THAT PETITION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!! oh, no... that petition... it can't pass... that would be horrible!!
naru thinks he likes neji. but really he likes sasuke. and sakura likes hinata! that's cute! i've never seen or really thought about that couple. AND ZABUZAXHAKU!!! YESSSSSSS!! they are the cutest couple EVER!! i love them!!!! please update soon! i can't wait!~
person Anon
schedule September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! this looks really good, I love your characterizations the Sakura/Hinata thing is pretty unique, and I'm a sucker for Haku Zabuza. I can't wait to read more!
person Nomme de Plume
schedule September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow, this opener really hooked me. i'm intrigued as to where the summary you gave comes in... perhaps something to do with sasuke's past? this is a good premise, and i hope you update soon!
person Jackee
schedule September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So far so good!! It's really intruiging and I can't wait to see more of it!
But if you could, please don't write author's notes in the middle of the sentences, it's distracting and really takes away a lot of the fic.
Post your opinions either before or after the fic.

And if you get any shit about dissing religious people...just ignore it! :) People with opinions like that of Naruto's parents are a disgrace to humanity. (personally, i'm not an atheist as I do believe in an afterlife, but man....how I hate religion. The quote you have in the beginning is so true!)
person nyeh
schedule September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
my friends go to st. paul's! what a coincidence. i go to a private school, too.

i like this story alot. the whole private school setting, naruto having parents, its all so cool! i loved sasuke's answer: "something like that".
i saw some OOC but since this story is AU we can forgive it.
update soon!
person aria
schedule September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like it. your story has a lot of potential, i think.
what happens next? it will be NaruSasu? oh, it's my favorite pairing.
can't wait for the next chap. keep up the good work!
person dancingkitsune
schedule September 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
poor naruto.........i cant wait for the next chapter, i hope you update soon <3