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Aaaaaw, i'm so sorry to hear this. I really want to know whats going on. Anyway, i just followed you to FF. and i left you a review there. Definetly continue with the story. You had much more than a decent plot there and i think alot of people can relate to your story. I do hope you come back here. Keep on writing!

Aww. I'm sorry to see you go. You should also try TONFA. I will still continue to read your story on ff.net. I do really enjoy them. Good luck, and best of wishes. Take your time on your story. Don't worry about upsetting others. If they are loyal readers they will wait. Take care.

Animehead

First off, love your story! YOu keep characters in character well enough to picture it all happening. Also, I liked how ou started a SakuHina instead of InoSaku, those get repetitive and don't seem as likely. And using the religious conflict in the Uzumaki household to thicken the plot is great!
Please update as soon as you can!

P.S. I think I might be able to help with your writer's block. (this works on all my friends) When blocked read or have someone say this:

EGGPLANT!

I am really enjoying this story right now. The plot is fantastic. I've been looking for a story kind of like this that deals with religion and whatnot. Your writing is excellent, and I just hope that you'll keep it up. It's so difficult finding good SasuNaru stories to read nowadays.

This is good! I've been reading it and I really really like it! Write more write more write more. Do it! Take a sledgehammer and squish writer's block! (I know from experience that doesn't really work, but believe!) I'm using exclamation marks a lot! Why is that! I'll stop. Really, though, it is good. One of the better Naruto/Sasuke AU ones I've read in my long history of reading fics. (Which is vast...) I love the Hinata and Sakura stuff, you should write more of that. Though what you've got going now is exceptionally well done. From one writer to another, you're very talented, please continue!

You're pretty good...who am I kidding-I want it-I want it-I want it!!!!
...plz, I'd love you forever if you updated.

Awesome!!!!
More????

*is so happy*
man this so me except getting withsomeone and having over religious parents....
but the wierd heavy tenses silenece that coems between me and my ma when all i want to do is shout my secret to her...because her accepatance is more important than anyone elses...

Awesome story! I love it! Plez update soon!

wow it's like dun dun DUN I'm really in suspense, like edge of my chair suspense
can't wait till the next update, hope you have happy holidays
~Mystic~