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OK! XD Before this sicko yaoi crazed biatch goes sicko on you I just want to say....I LOVE LOVE LOOOOOOOVE YOUR STORY TO DEATH!!!! ITS SO AWESOME!!!! X3 I love reading it and I can't wait for the next chapter I'm so psyched (?...O_o)! And I know...Its kinda depressing that I didn't comment on any of your other chapters, but when I finished reading one I couldn't help but want to jump to the next one, so ya...^0^ BUT HERE I AM NOW!!! And..(this might have happened awhile ago...but) I LOVED THE PART WHEN SASUKE TOLLED OFF NARUTO'S DAD!!!! I was all like CHA!!! GET'EM!!! WOOT!!! Go Sasuke go Sasuke...lol X3 And wow I haven't talked so much for a LOOOONG time now...but I basically wanted to tell you how much I adore your story so far and I hope you keep writing it...^-^ *glomps you* X3 HUZAH!!!

I love this story you HAVE to update it! It's the best!

OMG! I Love this story. ^u^ I can't wait for the nexts chapter. I like the way you did hinata. It was so her. I alway liek the sakura and hinata pairin. I sense arugments, and perveted conversation in the nexts chapter.

writer in training,
Shadow.Jinxs aka anmine art teacher

Aw, I love this story! It seems somehow more real, or honest than a lot of fics out there. And I know that I've said this before, but it really hits close to home for me. Your observations about organized religion mirror most of mine, and Naruto's home life is shockingly similar to mine. I like getting more than just your main pairing's story, too. You give the reader equal insight to all of the characters' pasts and presents. Well done and can't wait to see more!

mirandler

PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE WRITE MORE!!! THIS IS AN AWSOME STORY SO CONTINUE!!!

I love your story so much, you have even helped me write mu essay on gay rights which I am a hundred and ten percent for. I do hope you do not mind that I have borrowed and twisted some of your sentence. And i would give full credit to you for inspiration but I don't think my teacher would be to ecstatic about it coming from www.adultfanfiction.net. Soooo, please keep writng more. It is a fucking peace of art. Also one suggestion NaruSasu. And for the off chance you don't know what it means, well it means Sasuke is uke, submissive, whatever you want to call it. Remember sasUKE.

Oh and if you want to see the essay you inspired I would be happy to put it in my next review. Personaly I think it is good. Also I looked at your summary closely and guess what I saw NaruSasu sorry ;).

AHHH!!! love this story! Its very refreshing and different than most the stuff i've read. Im looking fwd to the next chapter!!!

Wow. Rasengan22 plugged your story at the end of 'Heroes' and I've only just gotten around to it. I have to say it's Wonderful. It deals with real issues to a degree which has been surprising absent from this site, despite its content, and while usually I would say that that was a good thing, and that I don't read fiction to be reminded of how sucky the world can be, cause I have to live in it, I still have to say, that your story is Amazing. I'm glad your keeping at it, and I hope that things work out for you or at the very lesat get a little easier to handle. I have to applaud your bravery and aplomb for even attempting to handle this project, and you've been doing it marvellously. It's very serious and heart felt, you write well and your head is in the right place (at least according to me). I got to the end and when I realised there were no more chapters, the word "Noooo!" escaped before I felt thoroughly silly, and sheepish. Thank you, I'm not 100% sure what for, but I feel the need ot say it. Thank you. @--'-,---

Sasuke? Grinning? Oh my how unlike him XP.

Sorry it took me so long to review! I've been super duper busy and haven't had a chance to reaaaad anything XP. *huggles* AWESOME CHAPTER! I still don't really get how Naruto's mum saw them kissing though o_O... Jiraiya sounds awesome. Hanabi sorta pisses me off >< but bah, it's to be expected I suppose... with her being mean to Hinata TT_TT.

I'm asking for the next chapter XD! Please update soon!