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for Where is God?

by Innerchild

person Nomme de Plume
schedule November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh man! let old people sleep, nomme needs her chapters! this one was soooo good, though i would have felt better had naruto punched kazuma one before bolting. and telling his mom off. you are going to write that in, right? he needs to, geez.

anyway, great chapter, and i can't wait for the next one! update soon!
person sadistickiss
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HeiyaZ I just found this story XD. It's uber awesome! I love SasuNaru stories to do with religion ^^. Sasuke sounds way cool. Naruto sounds adorable - and trapped, poor thing =3. His parents piss me off but kssh, they're his parents... Anyway, AWESOME story. Update soon XP!
person Briryan
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Oh I can't wait to see how Naruto's parents reaction will be to his running out on them. That should be interesting. Looking forward to the next chapter.
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ack! half chapter or not, this was really powerful to me! i gotta say, i was proud of naruto for tryin' not to lose his cool with how angry he was at his dad right then--that's something i had LOTS of troubles with myself when fighting with my dad about stuff (religion just being ONE of the things) so i was like *squee* go naru for being mature!

and oh my, naruto's big scene in the street with the rain and the asking god where he was and what he said about if they hate him because of god he must exist.. just.. wow, that was so powerful, and top it off with the lightning and tree and it pretty much saving him from getting run over, ne? aah i hope you can work through your block and keep these awesome chapters coming (oh and congrats on the tongue ring, funtimes lol)
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
thank you for finally and at last updating!! i was so happy to see this! i was just updating my own fic when i decided to check the m/m section for the eighth time in twelve hours. i do that all the time. so yay for updates, ne? hope to see more soon, i love this story a lot! i hate naru's dad, but i get the feeling that's the point... anyway, i hope you update soon!!~
person Izzy
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg!!! ur doing so great!!! the point of views are very nicly done as well, i havn't been confused yet, and it seems u don't need a beta at all!!
i love how at first naruto and sasuke where just sex-buddies but now there something, more, a more develiping(how u spelll dat?) relationship, it is very, very touching, i will be checking back!! update soon, and i hope school works out for you...and what are you thinking about having for your tatoo? i just have a little "I" you know...something simple...oh man i'm tried...wow minue(french for midnight[i hope i spelled it right])
have a good nights sleep!! g'nite
person urban mystic
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow I f;ipped when I saw you updated. short but swet I like. oh and if my email doesn't show up again it's klt.girl@yahoo.com I really need to stop being lazy and get an account, ah well.

luv ya always
*Mystic*
person Rasengan22
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Guess I picked a good time to start this since you updated already! XD I almost should have waited to review here because this chapter was like amazing! And yeah, darn, I wanted it to go on a little longer, but if you're tired, you're tired! Hmm... I hope you were able to eat something if you got your tongue pierced! I couldn't eat for days! O_o But keep it up! You're like my favorite new author; I really enjoy all the raw emotion in here. And that scene where Naruto was running out in the street... just, I could picture that so easily with the rain and everything that was going on with him. It was just an awesome action sequence. That's really hard to do!
person Rasengan22
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap, so I had been reading the summary for this and had been so busy I didn't get to read it until tonight. And by read it, I meant I just finished the first chapter. And I was gonna wait until I read all chapters before reviewing, but I don't want to BECAUSE THIS IS AWESOME. It's so different. And so many pairings, and so many different stories... I'm excited to see how they all come together (LOL once I click on next chapter) but I just wanted to say this is already awesome, and even just at the end there (though I'm used to reading about petitions being signed so that gay marriages won't be recognized by states; sidenote: if a state can ban gay marriage then that can lead to gay couples being unable to adopt children because stupid legislators can rewrite laws to say kids can only be adopted into a household w/ two married parents. This happened in lots of states! And so yeah, if you can't get married, you can't adopt kids. And that's really what evil legislators are doing when they go on about gay marriage, becuz once they can outlaw that they can do a whole bunch of under the table things! *was journalism student* I really like the Sakura/Hinata subplot idea... this is amazing!

So what I was saying is that this story is going to f'n rock!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It's really really cool.
person ladywolfTerri
schedule November 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Okay... I'll be honest.. I thought about reading this fic for awhile.. but kept deciding not to... then today I said screw it and clicked the link..

And I'm damned happy that I did!!...^.^

This is a wonderful fic and I look forward to reading more!! Especially now that Naruto's mom saw them... I had a feeling when you mentioned a car slamming on their brakes... I'm really enjoying their awakening feelings... how they are realizing them and Naruto's search for answers!

I was taken to a church 3 times in my life and forced to go to a youth group meeting once... those that made me go never made the same mistake again... XD.. but hey.. I had fun..and that's what matter, right??... umm... yeah! Right!... ^.~