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for Shadow Leaf Dance

by GenocideHeart

person korrd
schedule March 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is really good. So good in fact that I'm going to beg that you continue it with the adventures of Naruto's team if possible.
person Shadow
schedule March 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Are you SURE this is your first time writing a lemon fic? Because it is one of the best ones I have ever read.
person redsky
schedule March 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
holy shit, batman!!! THERE. IS. A. GOD!!!!!! that was fucking fantastic!!! you, my friend, have just made my year! out of all the naruto/hinata/Anko fics i have ever read, this is by far the best! if u were near me right now i would give u the best and biggest hug of your life!! Feel the love!!!!!!!!!! you have no idea just how unbelieveably terrific your fic is!! i'm just soooo happy that i finally found a fic that wasn't complete crap (no offense to some of u other talented authors out there. i've just been having no luck in the past few months with finding any fics that were actually worth the read. i guess i haven't been looking in the right places or something... *shrugs* i don't know.) Keep up the good work!!! thank you and all the people you helped ya!
much love,
~redsky~
person DualX
schedule March 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
After Reading just about every naruto fic on aff.net
I found yours... again

I have to say, this is a more realistic fic to have happend then any other.

And as an Ego boost.

I have read sevral thousand naruto fics on ff.net

I came her for more open material...

This is shortly the best Naru/Hina fic with no plot whats so ever, that i have ever read.

As this is my first review here. and will not register untill the summer.

I really hope that you make a fic of this story.

Only thing i missed was a hina naru 69 ..

Oh well, See you later i suppose.
person Saico
schedule March 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was fan-fucking-tastic!!! One of the best fics I've read in a loooooong while.
person libat
schedule February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
bravo! Well done. Havent read a fic as well made as that. More!
schedule January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol, omg, story was even better the second time i read it. You really should turn this into a long fic, errrr..... a longer fic. The writing style is superb.
person Ashley22
schedule January 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey man don't put yourself down its a great story. And I for one would love to see this possible continued if you ever are feeling bored
schedule January 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMFG. First and foremost, I have to congratulate you on a job well done. Seriously, this is one of the best fics I have ever read. The charecters were done to perfection, the story itself was engrossing and yet hilarious, plus the entire thing altogether was pretty damn hot. Be proud of yourself that I am unable to find anything bad to say about your fic, especially since I am a pessemist. I would love to see you continue onward with this writing, you could easily turn this into an amazing long fic. On a final note, great job with the Naru/Hina pairing, there are not enough of them and most of those out are horrible. If you ever need help with writing or a beta reader do not hesistate to ask. You are officially allowed to sit at the cool peoples table now. Congrats :) I can be reached at Nameramthgin@hotmail.com (lol, thats a tough one to remember)

*A brooding figure looks over his shoulder* "Chibi-namer, its time to leav- what the....."
As the figure turns around he sees his manifested dementia finish eating a fanfic. The terrifying little shadow creature lets out a sqeak of joy before collapsing, his eyes going into spirals.(lol, like this @@)
*Sweatdrops* "Well,...... that has never happened before. Guess he overdid it. Oh crap, I know what this means......" *Nosebleed, then collapses*
person Ladynaye
schedule January 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Too fucking hot! More more Naruto/Hinata!!