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for Shadow Leaf Dance

by GenocideHeart

person reader
schedule December 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you are a KICK ASS writer!
person Maginman
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Honestly, I'm not usually a fan of stories that change the Cannon, but n this case I'll make an exception. Yeah, I know you don't care, but I just wanted to give some idea of how much fun this story was for me. Hot story, well written, creative... I really couldn't ask for more. Thanks for the memories!
person I Love This Story And I'm Only Effen 12
schedule November 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Love love love! Everyone stayed in character, except for Hinata, but considering the position you put her in, you did very well. WONDERFUL!!
person Ryan DIetz
schedule November 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooooooohhhh.... That was friggin HOT!!!! very well done, and Hinata, contrary to what most would think reading this story, seemed VERY VERY in character to me... this was lovely, other then the whole haveing Anko involved thing... that weirded me a bit but whatever, you plan on makeing a more "romance centric" fic outta this instedda a "fuck the brains outta hinata and naruto" type fic any time soon? If your not thinking of it... prepare to have multiple kuni shoved into multiple uncomfortable places >=D And now realizing that I am rambaling on, I bid you adu.
person dark purity
schedule November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was an awsome fic. i thought it was written really well. if you could write another one or a sequel that would be great!!
person Darkstar
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy wow. That fic was awesome. Well, anything that's NaruHina deserves a look over by myself, but that was amazing! Well thought out, long, descriptive....the work you put in really shows!

I hope you write more! :D
person redhand
schedule November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that this is one of the greatest fics that i have read on this site. I hope that you write something again.
person Audrey
schedule November 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Very, very, very graphic. I loved it. It was sweet that Hinata was willing to do all that for the boy she loves. Great story. I applaud your talent.

Audrey Rose
person Naachan
schedule October 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
An Anko/Hinata/Naruto three-some? And a well written one? I am in love.
person Pyr00tje
schedule October 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
To kitsune who last reviewed this...

The author said centimeters, not inches :) It's a big difference :P

Anyway.. This fic is by far the best and most descriptive NaruHina lemon I've ever read. And that's saying a lot...

More plx :p