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for Shadow Leaf Dance

by GenocideHeart

person chibified kitsunes
schedule October 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Rx7 might have missed something, because I highly doubt Naruto could have a dick that's 12 inches long and 14 inches in circumference. that's just unproportionate. Think you might have meant 12 by 4 inches???

But anyway, well done!! I loved it!!! :)
person -
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it, I love it, I don't hate it.
This was a piece of work that I enjoyed reading (and I read A LOT of naruto fics [not proud of it])
I like how you kept the character's overall personality the same while commiting to your own story
Would like if you would either A) Continue with this story or B) Write another story of similar quality
(Naru[Multiple] are my favorite)
If you need a proof-reader I am always availible.
Once again, congrats on the making of such a good story.
person roxas
schedule October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was awesome make a sequal
person PupPet13
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was so freaking kinky. i was twichin most of the time readin it. you have a future in erotic novels my friend.
if you do go into that proffesion i fear i might become like Kakashi though.
person PupPet13
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i was just lookin over my fav parts again and decided to see what others thought. that Anonymous dude ya ignore 'im the smuts great and if i never read a naru/hina fic again i think i could live with that... ok maybe not but still. my first day on the sight and i find the greatest lemon in the net. i always knew i was a lucky basterd.
person PupPet13
schedule October 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
im a dick i know but the best sayin just came to me "when life gives you lemons read them." or whatever. PEACE BITCHES!!!

P.S. if i pissed you off email me and ill let u kick my ass i don't care.
person N0o13
schedule October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GR3AT WORK. I LOV3 IT!!!1!!1!!
person chibified kitsunes
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! naruto x hinata = my favourite OTP.

the fact that anko was involved made it all better! haha.
really really enjoyed this one. the flow was really good, the smut awesome. you did an awesome job!!

i love it!! and when anko let hiashi in on their relationship, that was really considerate of her.
although she MIGHT not seem the type, she IS part of their threesome and somewhat understands them.
so great job!! =)

keep up the good work.
person Zendura
schedule October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awsome storie
Naruto = :)
Hinata = :)
Anko = =====>
0)
person Anonymous
schedule October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Truthfully? THat was the best story I have ever read. You are a great author. GREAT GREAT GREAT. Although I really don't approve of ll that dirty stuff. Maybe ou could try and write something that does not involve sex?? Best fanfiction ever nevertheless. Keep up the wonderful work...!