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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter. Poor Sasuke and Naruto, so much hardship. Can they just be nice to each other and enjoy the day? Great job though, really liked it.
Sunset Serenity
Sunset Serenity
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
cried.
again
but it was for happy now.
happy is good
crying is good
my tummy hurts
again
but it was for happy now.
happy is good
crying is good
my tummy hurts
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October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
crying.
Again.
Fuck you.
I love you ;-;
Again.
Fuck you.
I love you ;-;
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October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*bites her lips frantically*
Happy end.. please let there be a happy end ... *hold her thumbs*
Gnargh.. this is too much to handle.. i love this story!!
Happy end.. please let there be a happy end ... *hold her thumbs*
Gnargh.. this is too much to handle.. i love this story!!
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October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow... it was just... wow! Naruto telling Sasuke that, trying to make him react. I hope that it works in the end... as much as I hate seeing both of them hurting like that, I loved this chapter so much, it makes you think about so many things... please keep updating, don't rush yourself, but don't take to long ok? Because the wait will certainly kill me
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October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my!
I think my heart hurts.
There is only really one other fiction that made my heart hurt and want to cry,
this is the other one.
It's a good thing. It shows you know how to draw on the readers emotions.
Thanks for updating!!
Can't wait to read the next one.
I think my heart hurts.
There is only really one other fiction that made my heart hurt and want to cry,
this is the other one.
It's a good thing. It shows you know how to draw on the readers emotions.
Thanks for updating!!
Can't wait to read the next one.
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October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! I can't take the supense!!!!
I think your story is gorgeously written and the characters more real than I've ever seent them written before. You are amazing.
I think your story is gorgeously written and the characters more real than I've ever seent them written before. You are amazing.
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October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ARGH! ARGHARGHARGHARGH!! I'm mad at both those idiots! THEY SHOULD JUST LOVE EACH OTHER, SHAG, AND SHUT THE HELL UP!!! *pouts* But nooooo~ It's always so emotional! Which adds something to the goodness but my GOD! *sighs* Anywho~ It was still a great chapter. Though, I kept thinking Naruto would just let Sasuke kill him to be happy. O.o I have no clue why...=o I hope you post the next chapter soon.
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October 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Still love it. And I have no idea how this will end. Will Sasuke come back? Will they begin to heal their pain?
I have no idea, you could have this end tragically, and it will still be as ic as it would be if it had a happy ending....
Keep up the brilliant work, coolsa.
P.S. when this is done, what next do you have planned to write?
I have no idea, you could have this end tragically, and it will still be as ic as it would be if it had a happy ending....
Keep up the brilliant work, coolsa.
P.S. when this is done, what next do you have planned to write?
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October 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!! OMG.... I like how you gave credit where it's due. I read Lace and Strawberries and I loved the Sasuke/Saki character so i can completely see how you'd be compelled to write a story like this. I love angst, and I love complicated plots, and this is certainly filling my appetite for the moment. I do hope you have a good trip and I'm looking forward to your next updates. ^-^
Until later,
sharingan.swirl
Until later,
sharingan.swirl