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aww i almost cried! this fic is really great, but sad, too.. sasuke's my fav character, and everything that's being done to him is just so unfair. now i hope he could run away with naruto and embark on a new life.. :P :)

You know, I always thought Sasuke looked kind of feminine. I think that your plot is ingeniously crafted,intertwining and connecting different aspects of the story line with true finess. Sasuke's motives were not only beleiveable, but also surprising. I honestly didn't see it coming. You set it up so that the unveiling was like a pulling a rug of from under my feet. You're a genius and I adore you.

Oh...I have to say that for some time this was not my favorite story. But the concept was interesting enough to keep me reading. Then, the emotion started swaying me at right around the end of chapter four. And by God and everything that's holy, the suspense was killing me in chapters five and six. I breathed the proverbial sigh of relief when the pronouncement was made, and I now have a firm belief that Morino Ibiki is an entirely horrid jerk. I hope that the last chapters will be as good as these past few. Thank you for your wonderful work.

a/j

cried again. much, much harder.

How do I like this fic? I thought I told you already. I don't like it. Not at all. I LOVE it. I LOVE IT!!! I absolutely love this story, your reasoning for the happenings, the details you used to add depth, angst and interest, your ability to bring to live the charactors' emotion. For example, in this chapter, I like the reasons you had for the council's decision not to execute Sasuke because Naruto might get so angry to the point that he might harm Konoha. It makes sense. How could Naruto continue to love Konoha unconditionally if Konoha killed his mate?
I will be patiently waiting for the next chapter. I hope Sasuke will come to terms with himself and Naruto and Saki. There's still hope that a happen ending is possible, isn't it? Have Fun wherever you're. You know that I, and we, will miss you.
-VTY, Redcloudangel

Oi, you must be good because you had me -terrified- that this was going to be a character death fic o_o.

It was beautifully written. I enjoyed reading it a lot. I'm angsty to find out what'd happen next. =D. Maybe Sasuke can learn to enjoy life in Konoha, can't he?

I had to look up occidental, since you thought the trial was thus... and now I'm a bit miffed because I'm not sure which definition you where leaning towards. Anyway. If there was anything, anything at all wrong with anything in your most recent update (6) then I am failing to percieve it. That must mean that either there IS nothing wrong with it, or I am incapable (by act of ignorance) to notice anything wrong with it. As I am a perfect genius (or something like it) I refuse to believe that there is error on my part. Which means the only feasable option is that there is NOTHING wrong, or missing or 'occidental' (whatever it may mean) with the whole thing.

So far, honestly this fic is supurb. You have a level of skill and class that outranks anything I've read in the Naruto fanfiction section. You make me cry more in one sitting than I have in the last two years combinded. This is amazing work, fantastic, psychological, and just god damn brilliant work. I can't even be in awe of you, because I've been in awe before and this far surpasses that. This is the kind of emotion that can not be defined because it's so beautifully rare that nobodys had a chance to grasp and name it. I think I might call it 'Sponge' just because I have a naming fixation. Yes that last sentance was random, but I felt that I needed to break from my seriousness for a moment. Probably just made you frown... well tough it's all your getting.

Okay. Back to my thoughts on this whole piece so far. Being a wordsmith by nature (or at least I'd like to think of myself as such) I find it almost incomprehensible that I can not truely express the way that your story affects me. I imagine that my words will hold little relevence even, but that will not stop me from trying (as I have).

Amidst the rambling I believe I've lost the plot (my own - not yours) and I should therefore sign away as if this is all I have to say about your amazing work of art (because it IS a work of art).

I wait with baited breath and strained emotions for the completion of this story.

Kimra Lelanst

Sweet!! More!! Very nice fic

Okkk... I like this so far, but it gets me kinda depressed to see Sasuke in such a state, scratch that I AM depresed, but I'll keep reading and hope that I don't get to masochist with myself, jocking jocking, that was a long time ago. Anywas keep updating and please make it a happy ending