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You are an amazing writer. Your fiction pulled my heart, especially this chapter (Ch. 5). I know it's a fiction but it feels so real. It hurts so much. I always have a soft spot for Sasuke and I hope he'll do fine, he and Naruto. Maybe Sasuke wanted to get killed, as he was weak (or he felt weak), and he could not face himself. Maybe Council would grant his wish, killing him but not Saki. But Saki is Sasuke. I don't know. Please save him, them. Please let them live. - VTY, Redcloudangel

Absolutely love it. So powerful emotionally and thought provoking, it was just amazing and I can't even imagine what is going to happen next...and to think I have to wait three more days for the ending. At least you update daily. :D

Keep up the brilliant work, coolsa.

Usually when I start reading a story and cross-dressing is involved, I stop reading right then and there. But I am so glad that I did not do that with your story. And I know it wasn't just coincidence that I didn't click away, it's definitely your writing that kept me reading. I like how we get to see a psychological breakdown of Sasuke, and surprisingly Naruto as well. When Naruto first finds out that he's being "supervised", he realises that Sasuke has become his only focus and he has been blind to everything else. And the great thing is that I, as the reader, felt the same way, that I should have known that something else had to be going on behind the scenes, but I, just like Naruto, was too wrapped up in trying to figure out Sasuke. It's a really great story and I will be eagerly awaiting the next update!

This story is heart wrenching. The facades that you have given Sasuke are painful. I just hope that it has a happy ending because that would make me very upset. I know everything that Sasuke has done but I still couldnt see him condemed for his mistakes. Besides, what would Naruto do without Sasuke? Just update soon so I can see what your veridict is. You did mention that you had the whole story written already. Just post soon please.
Am sorry if am coming on weird but am very unerved with the way this fic is going and unfortunetaly, I am a very sensitive person. This is causing me to feel like crying and wish for some kind of plot twist where things do come all right in the end.
Anyway, thanks for the fic. It is very good if a bit dark for my taste. Please post soon.

Sincerely


Carla

Good JOB!!!
I love the fiction so far!!!!
Thanks for the update!!!
Yeah!!!
Can't wait until Tuesday!!!!

What do I think of the fic so far? Dear Lord I'm obsessed. You have a knack for writing angst that is unrivaled, and damn you for making me squeal with joy every time that I see that you have updated. And I LOVE the way that Sasuke was in chapter 6, like he finally found himself again. I cannot wait for the next chapter.

Wow! The latest chapters are oh so good. I thank you very much for sharing your wonderful fic.

Nice to have a good fiction that updates everyday. Keep up with the niftiness. You've fully caught my attention.

I just finished reading Chap. 3. Another wonderful chapter. I'm glad that Naruto didn't give up. Maybe there's hope that Sasuke will be back. I wish there's a way I could add this to my faves.
- Redcloudangel

What a chapter (4)! That was really awesome! I can see how Oro and Tsunade wanted to use Sasuke the way you described. You did a great job on the battle by the way. I agree that battles are so difficult to write. I am writing my first one and it has been two months and I'm still kinda working on it. (Maybe you can tell me how I do when it comes out? I feel embarassed already.)
I can't thank you for four amazing chapters in such short period but I'm hoping we'll see another chapter soon. ^ ^