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October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awesome battle scene, you did great !! now I want MORE :D
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October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Bravo, by the end of the first chapter I wanted to cry. It's full of anguish, and the characters are believable. It's a piece of art in this fandom. I couldn't wait to keep on reading, but I wanted to congratulate you before anything.
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October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your story is beautifuly writen. It is not often that one can find an author who is able to express the emotions and desires of their characters subtely. Your character development is phenomanal. I look forward to tomorrow for the next instalment to your beautifull story. Thanks.
-spiral
-spiral
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October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ughhhh making me WAIT
I hate you.
but I love you
and I want more.
I hate you.
but I love you
and I want more.
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October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whoo! That was exciting! o.o And this story is really good! I'm sad it's technically half over...;o;
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October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think I'll wait to give my whole review when I've read the whole story again (LJ is a bit messy for my glasses-needing eyes). But don't worry - I never do a down-review... So far and from all the chaps I've read from the LJ-comm - I DO KNOW - that this is among one of the best stories ever - even if the angst is just killing my happy-loving-heart. Asuka's story is good - but hmmm - I think I like this one better because of the flow.... but her story is a good foundation.... so thumbs up the the both of ya!
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October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Woah..the third chapter went skin-deep *blinks*
I'm rarley so shackled by a story..but this is woah!
I really, really can't wait for more!
I'm rarley so shackled by a story..but this is woah!
I really, really can't wait for more!
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October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dammit. I hope Naruto kills Orochimaru. Like, torture kill. Cuz that's what the bastard deserves! Grr! Anyway, good chapter though kinda sad. I look forward to the next one.
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October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you... made me cry
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October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter (#3). I am really loving the story and can't wait for the next update. :)