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for Tangled up in Lace

by CrazyToffee

person Dawn
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, I'm not too sure what to say here.
This is without a doubt of the best fics I have ever read!
It was so well written and had such a totally original and well thought out plot.
I loved your ideas on the characters personalities and lives.
The emotions portrayed were felt so real and natural.
This is one fic I can honestly say that I LOVED and I don't say that about very many of the fics I've read.
I've read a lot and I've really liked a lot, but loving one is a rare thing!
I can really only think of one bad thing to say about it and that's that it is over.
Oh well, I guess it's like they say, all good things must come to an end. This however, was a great thing!
I know this story will stay with me for a long time and that I will probably reread it over and over again.
Anyways, I just wanted to let you know what I thought and now I have.
This story was brilliant and amazing. I very much look forward to reading some of your other writing! :D
person Felicity
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That.was.FANTASTIC! It's been a long time waiting for a Sasunaru fic to come along with this level of awesomeness. Well written, great themes, and so close to the characters! I would love to see Naruto end like this (in my twisted perverted mind)...much kudos to you!
person kiss_me_deadly
schedule November 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That omake was too freakin' funny for words. Squeeeeeeeeaallllll!!!!!!!
person fujinakaheero
schedule November 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
whoa.. awesome story!
Just wanted to let you know that I really enjoyed it and I'm glad I got to read it.
person Anna
schedule October 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I completly cracked up laughing, you're evil! Making someone with a broken rib laugh so hard. ouch.... anyway it was awesome!
person Nyuchan
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG..

The omake is so.. *rofl* I ..omg.. no words *laughing her ass off*

lesbotransvestite.. i think i'm dying.. *faints*

lol ^.~
person Just_me
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just read your epilogue and....wow, I don't know what to say. It was so sad and heart-warming at the same time. Placing myself in Jiraiya I actually felt old, sad and happy. Heh, it makes me want to hug the pervert, hoping I don't get groped in return. XP
Your omake on the other hand made me laugh. When and how did THAT pop up in your head? XDDD It made me question Naruto's sanity. Also, Sasuke wearing a bra to hide weapons, lmao. The tent in Saki's girly panties was another one that had me biting my tongue. Crack at it's best. :D
It's sooooo sad the story has now officially ended. Ah well, I hope you'll write more stories in the future.

ja ne ^^V
person KinOfDragons
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
!!!! XD!!!!! I would've loved to have seen what would happen if Sasuke had agreed to that proposition. *winkwink* <3 I loved it though. Very happy as compared to the rest of the fic which really made me happy that those two could've reached that stage one day.
person wendyghost
schedule October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you took her story and made it greater! i remeber reading her story and thinking how bitter it really was and how deep. You continued and expanded on her idea and it was good. You added sweet to bitter and although sad, i could not help but think that it mirror true life. in reality dreams change and shift and its not always happy but we take what happiness we can get. i loved it!
person Gingitsune
schedule October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved reading this story. So much pain, angst and yet love throughout it all. Loved the way that you ended the story. That despite everything that has happened, they were able to overcome it all. Thanks for sharing!