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I simply loved the epilogue, a heart warming one, it brought tears to my eyes, it was simply beautiful, do you mind if I print it? This story was so awesom and had so much precious life lessons that it deserves to be printed and made into a book. It's ery difficult to make me cry, even less from happiness and that certainly proves that you're an awesome writter. I really hope to read more of your stories in a near future, you'll do a great service to this world if you keep writting. My congratulations for finishing this great story and in such a beautiful way, the story was great, with all the obstacles and the angst but finally with a happy ending above any predictions. A bow before you.
Sincerly yours
Anna

It was well written from part I to epiloque. I enjoyed reading. ^ ^

I want to say how glad I am that I clicked on your story both out of curiosity and on the reccommendation of a friend--it's completely blown me away!!! What could have been a fangirlish excuse to dress Sasuke in drag has been instead a compelling tale of someone's struggle with uncomfortable emotions and a traumatic past, and the one person who serves as a constant in their lives no matter what. It's clear that you know a bit about psychology; I didn't once question what was happening in Naruto's mind regarding the things going on with Sasuke and events and people around them both. I totally believe that Naruto's probably the only person who could handle someone so needy and broken and not lose his sanity or back down when the villagers gossiped about the two of them, while allowing for it to be a struggle for him as well. You brought the situation through the climax to a beautiful conclusion that isn't a sappy, happy ending, really, but you did allow them to mend enough to make me more than satisfied. I completely loved this story, and I commend you on your thorough and creative exploration of such an unusual topic! You've really done something brilliant. ^_^

Brilliant. Just brilliant. With all my heart i wish i could write like this...

I have been fascinated by the Saki arc since I discovered Asuka's first one. The concept was a stroke of genius. I've read all of them, even the ones written by other authors. Yours took Saki a league beyond what has been written so far. At several points you had me fearful that Sasuke and Naruto were not going to make it together, but the way you worked out the passage of Saki was brilliant, and a much healthier union resulted. I feel you've written the definitive Saki saga. Though I surely don't want to see the end of all Saki stories, I can't imagine what could be left to say beyond what you have written. Bravo!!

okay...wow. so i almost cried. the only reason i didn't was because i held back. fanfictions rarely ever have this effect on me. you write so beautifully - i look forward to more from you in the future. and i should let you know that i don't think i've ever reviewed a fanfiction twice, either. so, *hugs* thanks so much!

I WANNA CRY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Dear lord you're good. i love how you can just call up emotions in your readers... True i wanna cry cuz it's the end of the story, but i really wanna cry cuz of Jiraiya's monologue (if that's the right way to describe it). You really did end this piece perfectly. I'm afraid to write anything now! :P lol I'm very much looking forward to other works!

Take care!
sharingan.swirl

I really enjoyed this story. I think you did a great job using Asuka's Saki.
I like your writing style and attention to detail. I think this story was well written, at least compared to some of the stuff I've been known to put down. bah.
I think the addition of the Epilogue was brilliant. It made the story feel a lot more complete.
I thoroughly enjoyed Tangled up in Lace.
There is one particular scene that is vivid in my mind. In chapter/part five when Sasuke is sitting on the bathroom floor disheveled, in Saki’s clothing and jewelry all over the floor. I think it would be an interesting picture, beautiful, and I want- intend on drawing it though I can’t say it will come out as beautiful as I imagine it too.
Anyway, I thought it was a wonderful story and the ending Epilogue was a nice add.

~Uchiha-Weasel

I loved your story very much. The character development is superb and so is the storyline. Usually even the word crossdressing is enough to make me run away screaming, but your story, wow.

It was a flawless epilogue. There were no loose ends. The mature Naru Sasu were true to themselves, to the original and your creation. I think Kishi will make Naruto Hokage. But I like how you left it open that Naruto might not become hokage for the precise reasons you mentioned, and still be content. And Sasuke finally accepted himself and Naruto, and was able to smile a true smile. The interaction between the two was gentle, loving and caring. I’m so happy how this turns out. You even took care of the secondary chartacters, such as Jairaya, Kakashi, Tsunade, Sakura and Lee. It was talent plus planning. You planned it perfectly. I’m proud of you!

After being so intimate with your story for a week, I feel I’m going to miss you. Or should I say your writing… But it’s you who wrote it…

Take care for now.

VTY - Redcloudangel