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Unbelievingly amazing. That's all I have to say. It was all so real.
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God! You gave me the scare of my life when Saki showed up! It was like 'What the F**K!' She is not supposed to be here! I thought you had decided to let Naruto be with the female Sasuke than the male Sasuke. I'm just glad that you did decided for the male. Also, the way things were developing had me thinking that Sasuke was actually there to say goodbye than to give Naruto his chance and in return him (Sasuke) have his own. I am still shocked with all that happened and how well everything is connected. I will be happily waiting for your last installment of this fic; well not so happy for the wait but you know what I mean, hopefully you do. Thanks for making it a happy ending of sorts so far. I love your fic and your work is great. I hope you win your nomination as this fic is brilliant! It is a piece of art in this category. Will be waiting for your next story with baited breath to see what your mind comes up with next and to see if you can top this masterpiece.

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Carla

ADORED IT.

Absolutely adored the epilogue. It was so well written and left the story on such a high note. My favorite thing about it was how you put it in Jiraiya's point of view...very nice. I cannot wait for your next project, and thank you so very much for sharing this with us. I think that those of us that found our way wondering how you were going to weave your way out of the twister of a plot you started with have been very pleasantly surprised. Kudos to you, and well wishes. :)

Wonderful fic! I loved it totally! I think the ending was brilliant and heart warming in the way Jiraiya narrated it. It went with his personality. Most of all the ending was natural and smooth without being sweet enough to decay your teeth and still have a happy ending. I hope you'll continue to write such great stories because even though I loved the story I am kind of sad it ended. I really looked forward to the next update! So I will certainly be waiting to read more of Naruto fics by you! Thanks for writing it and sharing! Bye!

Wow.

I wish I could say more. It is really very hard to explain how beautiful, well thought out, and emotional this story was. Probably one of the best in the entire fandom. Wonderful job. I'm sorry to see it finished. Please continue writing fics as I'll be awfully depressed not to seee your sn on the list of updated fiction here!

The chasing has come to an end. (Chap. 8) I’m glad that they are finally together. I take that Sasuke remained to be Saki because he thought Naruto loved and wanted Saki. It was interesting to see that Naruto was willing to accept Saki if Sasuke wanted to be Saki. I’m really happy Sasuke finally came to terms with himself and be himself again. It warms my heart. No promises, just enjoy the today, this moment. Nice. Really nice!

Congladuation for Tangle’s nomination for TONFA. (I don’t actually know what it is) I'm excited for you. You deserve The chasing has come to an end. (Chap. 8) I’m glad that they are finally together. I take that Sasuke remained to be Saki because he thought Naruto loved and wanted Saki. It was interesting to see that Naruto was willing to accept Saki if Sasuke wanted to be Saki. I’m really happy Sasuke finally came to terms with himself and be himself again. It warms my heart. No promises, just enjoy the today, this moment. Nice. Really nice!

Congladuation for Tangle’s nomination for TONFA (I don’t actually know what it is)! I'm excited for you. You deserve the recognition and acknowledgment.

- VTY, Redcloudangel
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- VTY, Redcloudangel

Great ending. I like that you told it from an outside perspective. It gave the story closure without having to rehash any issues between Naruto and Sasuke. Not that those moments didn't have their place, but as the reader, it's easier to identify with Jiraiya who is outside of the situation. It's also comforting to know that someone else looks at Naruto and Sasuke the way we do and appreciates their story just as much.

Overall, the story was very well written and kept a good pace throughout. I think you kept the characters true to themselves. One of my favorite parts is when Naruto realizes that Sasuke had wanted to be executed. Other authors may have gotten impatient and poured that part into one paragraph and had Naruto give some big speech about how he feels, blah blah blah. But you had the patience to really work through his thought process and still leave some for the reader to figure out. It's fun to psychoanalize Sasuke and figure him out and we were able to do that along with Naruto without having the "answers" just given to us.

Another of my favorite parts is the during Sasuke's trial when he and Naruto find out that the reason he gets to live is because Naruto would lose himself to the Kyuubi if he were executed. I think that put them in an interesting situation. Naruto was relieved and hurt at the same time that Tsunade would think that he would go against the village, but for him to be happy that Sasuke's alive means that he has to accept that he would have indeed lost control. Sasuke on the other hand is angry that he's alive, and insulted that the decision was based on Naruto and had nothing to do with himself.

So, in conclusion, I enjoyed the story very much. I encourage you to continue writing and I look forward to reading more of your work.

Thank you,
Emdog

very very very very nice. epilogue sums it all up through jiraiya's eyes. loved it.

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you're a simply fabulous writer, I can't wait to read more of your stories, fics, writings, antics, rantings and of course, smut o.o

I Love you

I love this story

I love how you played the characters. You're wonderful.