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for Tangled up in Lace

by CrazyToffee

person KinOfDragons
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm so inspired now. Thanks for writing this amazing story, it really made me think about the future. I might not accomplish what I dream of doing now (there's a lot of things =p) but there's nothing wrong with changing your goals. Beautiful. It's the most vivid lesson I've gotten out of any fanfiction I've ever read. So, congratulations on a story well-done. Well, more than well but you catch my drift. <3 I hope you'll write and post again soon.
person Shosuro
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That has got to be the best ending I have ever read on Adult Fanfiction!!!
I think you should all kinds of win any award that is out there!!!
That was beautifully done.
I will keep an eye out for your next project!!!
Thanks for the wonderful story!!!
**hugs and kisses***

~Shosuro~
person Shosuro
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh the Angst!!!!
Oh the pain!!!
Oh the....sweet Jesus Naru/Sasu and Sasu/Naru action!!!
Your ending was so sweet and full of angst!!!
It was just perfect how you end it, with lovely smutty action that fit with the story line!! It was really good I think!!! I have to give you all kinds of props for this one!!! I think I have to grab the box of tissues!!!....what?!?....its for the tears!!! Really!!! No, really I think that your writing was well done in a beautiful way. There was nothing out of the ordinary with your story(Except for Saki but even that was done in a good way). Your story fit the charactors personality to the T. What more can I say I will be looking forward to read what ever comes out of that pretty little head of yours!!!

~Shosuro~
person Sas-uke
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hot tamales. A smecks scene that made my blood -boil-. You're spiffy.
person hellagoddess
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This has left me with such a feeling of complete and utter joy.

Thank you. So much.
person snow_angel
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
the ending was so good i'm crying now. i needed to go to sleep to get up early in the morning for school but i just had to stay up to read this chapter. I'm so happy, this was such a good fic, and i think it was so amazing how it ended, it was so hard to read, i thought naruto had lost sasuke forever but it's so good to know that he got him back, even if just for a little while. pls post soon!
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Finally. I waited all day for this chapter to come.

I ABSOLUTELY loved it!!!

I wonder what the epilogue will be like....btw what new story shall you bring us?
person DK
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Eeeeeeeeeee!! such a great story, love it! thank you so much for this /hug, can't wait to read the prologue :)
person Nyuchan
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*sighs* I'm happy.. Happy end ^.~

Omg..i haven't read an exciting story like this in ages. It..was so perfect in a way. Your words, the writing style.. everything fits so wonderfully with your story!

*mega thumbs up with shiny Gai/Lee teeth-grin*

I simply love it. Thank you for the story! :D
person Just_me
schedule October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Waah, I had some catching up to do. (TO be honest, I forgot the title and hit myself in the head later on when I found it. I mean, the title screams Saki/Sasuke vs Naruto XS. )
I read the four last chapters. The last two chapters actually got me angry... towards Sasuke. I actually started glaring at my Sasuke-doll after reading Sasuke showed up as Saki in the last chapter. I was soooo glad that in the end, Sasuke choose to be...Sasuke again. It kept me from throwing Sasuke-doll against the wall. :P
But hey, you made one hell of a masterpiece, that's for sure. I enjoyed every chappie and can't wait for the sequel.

ja ne ^^V