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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don’t really read a lot of stories these days. I’m quite busy. For fan fics, I don’t even have time to update my one or two stories, or follow up with the stories I put on favs (FF dot allows favs). I wonder why I have been loyally following this story, from the beginning, and reviewing every chapter. I don’t usually read angst. *sigh * Your writing made me do it. You are good. Your writing’s good. The story’s intriguing. The way you described Naruto, Sasuke and even the secondary characters’ emotions has been amazing. You can’t image how much I admire you, your talent in writing and you ability in gasping the characters’ psyche, and that of the readers as well.
For once, I want to be specific. For chapter 7, I like how you described Naruto’s reaction to the verdict and his decision to give Sasuke the space he might need to come to terms with himself.
Sasuke’s challenge to Naruto was a surprise – a nice surprise for the flow of the story. Your reasons for his anger were solid and believable.
Naruto’s response to Sasuke’s challenge was well handled. He knew Sasuke. He walked even if he wanted so much to just hug the bastard.
One last thing, you use flashbacks effectively.
By the way, this must be my longest review ever. *smiles * Ja ne.
- Redcloudangel
For once, I want to be specific. For chapter 7, I like how you described Naruto’s reaction to the verdict and his decision to give Sasuke the space he might need to come to terms with himself.
Sasuke’s challenge to Naruto was a surprise – a nice surprise for the flow of the story. Your reasons for his anger were solid and believable.
Naruto’s response to Sasuke’s challenge was well handled. He knew Sasuke. He walked even if he wanted so much to just hug the bastard.
One last thing, you use flashbacks effectively.
By the way, this must be my longest review ever. *smiles * Ja ne.
- Redcloudangel
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What an amazingly well written chapter, thank you so much for this, I really enjoyed reading it :)
The words that Naruto said to Sasuke were so true, the love those two share is so intense and yet it has to deal with so much hurt too, can't wait till the next update.
The words that Naruto said to Sasuke were so true, the love those two share is so intense and yet it has to deal with so much hurt too, can't wait till the next update.
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for the finale!
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another fabulous chapter, but darn you for alwasy updating right before I go to work. I see it and can't wait and then am always at least 5-10 minutes late. I think I'm going to have to stop looking at updates before work. I love the way that you get into the characters heads and its messy and real and just very human. I think that is the best compliment for a writer...that they have made something tangible...something real.
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked it a lot! this complicated relationship that naruto and sasuke have.
But i have to be honest and say that sasukes "oh, please pitty me" is getteing on my nerves. But hey, thats the way he is, and he need someone that haven't given up on him yet - so all i can say is that he really needs naruto, To susrvive, and deep inside i think that's what he wants.
Well at least thats my opinon of what I'v seen so far in the story.^^;; Maybe Sasuke just mad because Naruto fell in love with Saki first, and he is mad at himself for letting Naruto fall for her, and not him? Ah, how knows?
Anyway - awesome story!
It is really interesting!
But i have to be honest and say that sasukes "oh, please pitty me" is getteing on my nerves. But hey, thats the way he is, and he need someone that haven't given up on him yet - so all i can say is that he really needs naruto, To susrvive, and deep inside i think that's what he wants.
Well at least thats my opinon of what I'v seen so far in the story.^^;; Maybe Sasuke just mad because Naruto fell in love with Saki first, and he is mad at himself for letting Naruto fall for her, and not him? Ah, how knows?
Anyway - awesome story!
It is really interesting!
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
and i thought lace and strawberries was good... very nice development... hope you update soon. :D
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is such a good story. The beginning is absolutely fabulous. Great job with Naruto and Sasuke. I can't wait to finish the rest. ^^;;;
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow. talk about profound psychological fanfiction. this is great. awesome. ive very rarely read something as well-done as this. the character depth, the intricate plot, the well-developped character relations. Thank you for the great read. update soon.
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was so sad. It is painful to see them going thru this. I know that it is necessary though, after all, they cant just be happily ever after. There is too much bad blood in both their lifes for that. However, I do ask for a happy ending, do let Sasuke come to terms with his current life and his own fault for it to be that way. No more Saki please! From here on out, only Sasuke please! Let him be strong enough to be with Naruto as his twisted self and not a bad imitation of himself. This is what Naruto wants after all.
You know, your story is really heart wrenching and when I think about the anime even related to this makes me want to cry, stop watching it, and wish I had never seen Naruto at all. Which in turn would make me a coward but my life is painful enough as it is for me to be watching fiction like this. Dont mind me, I got depressed with everything that went down in the story.
I know I will read the story until the end and even if there is some similarity between the real story line of Naruto to your story, I will see the rest of Naruto. I dont think though that any of the relationship between Naruto and Sasuke would go this far in the anime. What I mean is Sasuke never being "good" again like before he decided to join the Oro guy. I do want him to go back to being a shinobi fo the Hidden Leaf Village but he probably wont. Does he become the Oro container in the anime, do you know?
Anyway, thanks for the story and for your last update. Please update soon and if you can fit in the last two updates I would love you forever! Thanks again!
Sincerely
Carla
You know, your story is really heart wrenching and when I think about the anime even related to this makes me want to cry, stop watching it, and wish I had never seen Naruto at all. Which in turn would make me a coward but my life is painful enough as it is for me to be watching fiction like this. Dont mind me, I got depressed with everything that went down in the story.
I know I will read the story until the end and even if there is some similarity between the real story line of Naruto to your story, I will see the rest of Naruto. I dont think though that any of the relationship between Naruto and Sasuke would go this far in the anime. What I mean is Sasuke never being "good" again like before he decided to join the Oro guy. I do want him to go back to being a shinobi fo the Hidden Leaf Village but he probably wont. Does he become the Oro container in the anime, do you know?
Anyway, thanks for the story and for your last update. Please update soon and if you can fit in the last two updates I would love you forever! Thanks again!
Sincerely
Carla
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!! Another installment! I've been looking forward to Tuesday, but things came up and I was finally able to look up your story today to see that indeed, you had posted a new section. I love love LOVE how in detail you are with the psych of Sasuke. It makes it seem so real! I really really enjoy your writing and I do hope that even when this fic is complete, you'll continue to write other stories.
Until next time,
sharingan.swirl
Until next time,
sharingan.swirl