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The delivery was exquisite. I've never read this moment executed so perfectly. Five stars. Unbelievable.

oh my god... fucking awesome... right on the point, right with the words... right with everything.
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I really enjoyed this story. I misplaced it somewhere in my links for a while but I finally found it again >_< Even though it's just a short fic, it captures a lot of emotion and I could really empathize with Sasuke. I think all of us have been in a position where we want to atone for a mistake but just can't for one reason or another. I know I have and I suppose this is why I like the story so much. My favorite part is the ending:

"Sasuke opened his mouth to say something scathing, but Naruto’s eyes were the bluest thing Sasuke had ever seen. I’m sorry,” was what came out instead."

That was just beautiful. Thank you!

Aw. i really like this :) ur amazing

OMG I LOVED IT!!!!!!! YOU ROCK!!!! <3

Wow. I really love these kinds of fics! this one was perfect!

Well. I liked this too, very much. For me it didn measure in the same way as that masterpiece over there did, but it's ofc not the same type of fic either. I really liked it... It's well worked through, and writing this in SASUKE's ( of all ppls ) point of view, and making this kind of result is fantastic.

Couldn u lend me some of that writing skill you have? it seems to be utterly natural

Me likes it! a lot.. very well done, hopeful and sexy... all rolled into one... with the normal wariness of a betrayed but loving naruto and a repentant sasuke...nyah! great!! write more!!

AWWW!!! you are sooo amazinggg you REALLY dont get enough hits as you deserve, that makes me sad :(

Nice work. Angsty and surreal, yet realistic. I don't usually read anything yaoi, but this particular fic made the entire Sasu/Naru grotesquery acceptable.