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for Here's to the Fox

by BishounenKrazed

person Donedin
schedule October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok, so you didn't do the love triangle, but it's still really good. Im really curious to find out how this is going to play out so please post soon! ^_^
person dut
schedule October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
T-T wah~ another cliffhanger~ Sasuke better confess to Naruto soon so that he won;t do away~
person Tara
schedule October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Damn you Nomme!! Why sooo short?! *scowls*
Another good chapter!! Please update-SOON!!!
person lazykunoichi
schedule October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I disagree I like the way you wrote gaara, who cares if he's OOC they don't call it fiction for nothin ya know. Any way can't wait for more. Cheers!
person lazykunoichi
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay Gaara! woo hoo! nice chap!
person rasengan22
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ha ha i laughed at your author's note. crappy it is not. damn, you know sometimes i don't mind when bad things happen to sasuke (though i love sasuke to pieces) but damn he's such a bastard, but my heart was starting to break for this sasuke because i think things would be more hard and confusing without having grown up w/ naruto there. or maybe that's me projecting because i love naruto? hmm.. anyway, i kinda liked it cuz sasu's all vulnerable and all that. and yeah gaara is difficult. i mean i think he thinks, but then again i don't think he thinks A LOT. i think he's pretty astute but also relies on blunt/gut instinct thingies since he always had to go into survival mode even since a kid. doesn't allow a lot of time for introspection when your own father is always trying to kill ya. unless your b/g for gaara is different than the manga. i'm a nerd. good chap.
person Pixagi
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
“Nobody move.” You have made me fall deeply in love with that line...
person kyu77ryu
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Waaaaaaaaahhhh!!!

I really enjoy your works!

Especially this one!!!

Please, please, please update soon!

And don't stop writing! Neverrrrr stop!!
person lo
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was great!! The raw emotions the wonderful plot and characterizations, this is great. I just love what you have created. Great job.
person Shinigami24
schedule October 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*confused* I don't get it! WHY was Naruto given to the Kazekage-Gaara's father as a slave if he's Arashi's kid! Surely Arashi wouldn't want his own son to be used as a slave/weapon! WTF was Sandaime thinking?!