rate_review Reviews

WOW! Hot and steamy- darn Kakashi for messing things up when they were just getting good! I'm a little scared that Neji knows Naruto's screat- I hope Naruto wins him over though, because I like Neji. I was sad that it ended, your chapter was long but I got so into it it felt really short. (sniff, sniff) ( Not so subtle hint from TimeFlys to update soon! Please?) I'm really looking forward to seeing Gaara too! Can't wait till your next chapter!

This is a great story and you have had me on the edge of my seat since the last update. This story just keeps getting better and better as I read. Not to mention that I seem to be addicted to it now. So keep up the good work and I know what you mean about having to get papers in and them taking all your writing time.
So have fun and have fun working on this.

Awesome cahpter! SO just out of curiosity whop's the uke again? o.o

Oh you little devil you! How could you leave us with a cliffhanger like that, especially when it was getting so good!? Alright, let me retract that statement. Your chapters and writing are ALWAYS good. What I should have said is you left us hanging as soon as it got HOT!!! The way you wrote that last segment between Naruto and Sasuke was ten times hotter than just about any lemon I've read by other authors.
You certainly are a literary genius. I really hope that you are an English major because I am not just being kind when I say that you have a considerable talent for writing. I would even go so far as to say that you are the best writer with the most refined style on this site. I think I detected the first grammatical error in the last chapter but its so tiny and simple it’s negligible. I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter and to say I look forward to the next chapter is an understatement. My best wishes for you and your writing.


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it was just getting good

I hate Kakashi lol, nah I like the guy but he has the worst timeing... I wonder who will be the seme in this :D I love the story though I hope you'll update soon so I can entertain myself with a good story :3 update! :P :) ja ne

YES XD, love triangle please with sugar on top! I would really like one ^-^.

Kakashi y la puta que te parió!!!!!!!!!!!!! (spanish) Kakashi you son of a bitch!!!!!!!!!!
He really has a way to interrupt glorious moments.....

UPDATE SOON!

OMG!! I never ever thought I'd say this but Kakashi must die...how evil of him to interrupt just when it was getting good!!! Urrrgghhhh!!! Ok- now that that's out of the way (and I must say I do feel slightly better) I must say that I still really love this story and I can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!

It's very good, another great chapter. Personally I dont think Gaara should be mixed in, it would been mean, especially after Sasuke and Naruto have got this far. I dont want to read about either getting hurt.