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October 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lol, poor Sasuke and Naruto. Just when things were getting somewhere for them they get interrupted. Very good chapter. It seems Sasuke is out to protect Naruto's secret but it doesn't seem he will beable to much longer. Can't wait to see what will happen when the Hokage meets Naruto and what it is Kakashi and she seem to know about him. Also interested in what will become of what Kakashi witnessed and will he say anything about it. All the fangirls are in for a shock I think. Keep up the good work.
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More! More!
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THIS WAS THE CUTEST CHAPTER EVER! I love that you have brought Gaara into the story, I don't know how your going to make it all anxty but I guess I will just have to wait. ^_^ hope you post soon.
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am a liitle confused by the interlude but, I have faith that you will clear things up soon. This is a great story. Sweet without putting me into a diabetic coma. Nice!
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October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
:D This is a very good fanfiction, please update it.
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October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Kya!!* Hontou kawaii naa ^^. What a cute messenger. Anyway, am I allowed to whinge and ask when we get to see some SasuNaru fun? XP Update soon!
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October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
What a great story! I'm curious as to what will happen next...and I can't wait for the lemon scenes of course, heh heh. You write very well, I enjoy reading fanfiction that's not full of unnecessary synonyms and poorly conveyed ideas. You write like a pro! =P
Update soon please!
P.S. I liked the chapter that you disliked...chapter 3 was it? I don't know what was wrong with it...
Update soon please!
P.S. I liked the chapter that you disliked...chapter 3 was it? I don't know what was wrong with it...
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October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
gah, yes! please update soon, i'm really curious now.
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October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
such a good story! more please!
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October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I just noticed the two chapters you uploaded, they were both great!
ANd the first interlude definetly added to the mistery. I take it the Kazekage was Gaara right? He should be!
ANd the first interlude definetly added to the mistery. I take it the Kazekage was Gaara right? He should be!