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KYAAA!! I love this story! So cute!

Oh, ppuuuhhhh-leeeezzeee update this story. I'm hoping beyong hope that you do continue and finish this fic. I absolutely love it. I've been interested in the Sasuke/Naruto pairing, but have yet to find one that captured my reader's heart-until now. And while you don't feel so much for your latest chapter, I sincerely enjoyed it. The emotions were wonderful, and I'm very excited to see the connection and romance between Sasuke and Naruto bloom. Many hearts over, dear author!

wow.. i like your story its interesting... good plot

Definently a worthy chapter! Yay, I was kinda right! I love where you're going with this story. You can kinda get the gist of things, but then you express them in a completly different way than I thought you were going to. It really keeps you on your toes not knowing what you're going to do next. I love it! You think you sort of know what's going to happen, and then it does, but in a whole new and insightful way that compliments the story. Awesome! I really loved this chapter, and how you wove in little bits of SasuNaru into it, slowly setting up the relationship. It was very cute that when Naruto was telling his story, he was lying in Sasuke's lap and Sasuke was playing with his hair, calming him subconciously. So sweet! And the part at the end with Sasuke in the shower. Hilarious and cute! Sasuke's falling for his first friend, and Naruto's not making it any easier with all his hugging and cuddling. I just can't wait to see how their relationship is going to develop. If they get into a relationship before Sasuke leaves, maybe Naruto will be more inclined to come to Konoha with Sasuke? Or, maybe Sasuke will show his true feelings for Naruto when he jumps in the way of an attack for Naruto by those missing-nins, and then Naruto goes on a rampage, kills off a bunch, and Sasuke calls him back to his senses. Then they both head off to Konoha. Just a theory, because your story really gets me thinking in anticipation about what's going to happen next. I can't wait, please update soon if you can. And I thought that the telling of Naruto's story was very well done. Concise and to the point, but also containing key details needed. Well done. I really look forward to your next chapter where things go up a notch. Great chapter!

I liked it!! I can't wait for the next one, I want Naruto in Konoha! They can send ANBU to protect the village, but Naruto has to go! Mmmm... the next chapter promise to bt very yummy, I hope it comes out as fast as the other ones!

Oooooh~ I really like this! Very well written. I don't think I stopped once to ponder over a spelling mistake or grammer errors. The plot although not really very far in is wonderfull! I can't wait to read more, and I don't see why chapter four would be unworthy if you ask me it was good!

Please update asap
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Thank you very much for writting!

I LOVED THIS CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!! i don't think that you need to rewrite it. but, it's your story so it's up to you. can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!! update soon please!!!!!!!!!^-^

I love it!!!! Gosh why'd Sasuke run away? Because Naruto was the fox or because Naruto hadn't been telling him the truth?

I just love Sasuke's "visions" of a hot submissive Naruto!! Please I need an update soon!!

Your story is great! It's a very original idea and I love the incorporation of AU aspects with the Naruto world. I also liked chapter four. It was definitely something that parallels Naruto... Minus the limey Sasuke scene. Honestly, having those two hug each other and be friendly without straightforward implications of an actual amatory relationship seems like something from Naruto. Awesome job^.^