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Ya know what I HATE about your story?

Pssh.. yeah right.. as if anyone with any miniscule half of a braincell could ever find anything wrong with this story I'll personally shoot them myself. But seriously though.. I hate it when I find stories like yours... Oh you know what I mean... friggen brilliant in so many ways, in depth in description, fresh in it's new spin on the Canon plot, characterizations still in tact all the while... But the one thing I hate the most is that I was unfortunate enough to catch this lovely little ficlet at it's beginning. I really wish that I had found it when it's like.. five chapters or more in... Or I daresay.. even COMPLETE? O_O *Hears imaginary group of people gasp and shudder* I know it's so hard to find a good complete fic that isn't a one shot.. I my self am no one to talk.. *Looks over shoulder warily, hoping no yu yu or inuyasha fans jump from the shadows and torture me.*

Okay.. the point I'm getting at is... I LOVE this story.. but I HATE pining for updates.. Yours is the only one that has me coming back to the Naruto section.. A section that I until very recently have sadly overlooked.. So please.. please. please.. PLEASE DAMMIT!!!!!

Would you please in the name of all the Naruto Fandom.. For the Sake of ALL crazed yaoi fan girls and fan boys alike! UPDATE this story... You've got something briiiiilliant going here and if you don't want this poor ol Neko's brain to splode in her head you'd take pity and keep those chapters coming!


Am I being over dramatic?


Neko's Rate:: 5,000 STARS!

So how many people click on stories based on the rate stars?

This is a very interesting fanfic. I really like this. Do you have it on fanfiction.net too? I suggest you put it there too.

Goodness, I haven't found anything worth reviewing in a while so I hope I'm not too rusty. First of all, interesting twist to the normal storyline. I think I could really like this fic. I already like the contrast between the way Naruto is normally treated in Konoha, and the way he is treated in the other village. I'm curious to see how AU this story is and where you plan on taking the plot, so I definitely plan to read the next chapter. You might really have something here. I look forward to finding out just what exactly that is.



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It's sweet!! I really like, can't wait until there's more :D

KAWAII!! I must say I'm impressed, you're updating at a fast pace but that doesn't affect the quality of your chapter, not even a bit. You can surely count with me reviews for as long as the story continues

The last scene of this chapter is so cute! Poor Sasuke! Update please!

That was a good first chapter. I like the set up and am really looking forward to more.

this is so sweet. I love it.

Kawaii!!!!! very very sweet!!!!! Give me some more ne??
UPDATE SOON! (I'm becoming yonki)

So Naruto isn't a ninja of konoha here? You should definetly continue I want to see where is this going!