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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like the first chapter!
I hope to read more from this Story ^.^
I hope to read more from this Story ^.^
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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
interesting start, enough mystery to pull in the reader but you give enough information so you don't feel like your missing something needed to understand what is going on. Well done, hope to see more from you.
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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!update soon please!!!!!!!!!!!!!^-^
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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I liked it. It has a solid base and no plot holes so far. I look forward to reading more.
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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
^o^ I enjoyed this a lot so far. I'm looking forward to reading more. Keep up the good work.
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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hai!!!!
Please bother, please bother. I wanna know more!!
Please bother, please bother. I wanna know more!!
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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was rather good. I like the beginning storyline and I'm hoping to see more.