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for Here's to the Fox

by BishounenKrazed

person Pen
schedule July 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think Naruto is gonna go all pyscho and kill Itamaru (hehe) and then he's gonna go all emo and just start killing people at the loss of his mate. Or I could be on crack, both are possiblities. Oh, and I've been reading this story for a while, and I finally figured out what I thought was weird. You are spelling blond with an e, with makes it feminine. Blonde=girl, blond=guys. Sorry, had to point that out. Anywho, You are so mean with your cliffies...v.v Keep the story coming^^

-Pen
person Yabun
schedule July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Squick? Nah, that wasn't very squicky to me. Squicky for me would be Itachi screwing a very dead (as in days or weeks) Sasuke in multiple orifices, even creating new ones (ex: an eye socket or a large hole in the stomach). Of course I could make this worse, but I think my point has been made. My apologies if my description wasn't suited to anyone's mind or stomach. Anyways, I love your stories and this one is no exception XD
person Zigana
schedule July 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Is Naruto going to use Kyuubi to heal Sasuke?
person The Dragon
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, from what I can gather (after finally finishing reading this whole thing in a coupla days), I think Naruto is gonna go loco-Kyuubi on Itamaru's ass. >=D And, as he uses a bunch of Kyuubi's power to do so, thus becoming more like the fox then ever before, there is the possibility of considerable damage raining down on Konoha as well. XD
schedule July 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story!! I love your work and I can't wait for the update on this!

As to what I think is going to happen, well, I have a few theories but the one that I believe is more likely is this:

Naruto gives in to Kyuubi's chakra, basically raging because Itachimaru hurt his 'mate' if we look at it with the demon influence. That rage is going to take Sasuke's kill from him, but what will make Sasuke pissed might be that Naruto uses one of those forbidden jutsus that he spoke of in a previous chapter. It will either kill him (which I really, really hope wont happen) or its going to deplete his chakra so severely that his heart stops. I think they'll be able to revive him but it wil be quite a while after the battle before he regains consciousness.

...? Lol, I really have no clue :) but I can't wait to see what you do!
schedule July 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great story, i am enjoying it through and through. and i am guessing that naruto is going to kill itachi / orochimaru and he is hoping it wont mess up the relationship
schedule July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh my. `o_0`

that was sure and unexpected twist. Now not only is Naruto going to distroy Itachimaru (heh), but all of Konoha as well. Talk about Irony!
person razenghandouble2
schedule July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
whaaaaat up. wow, how long has this story been going on? holy crap, i can't believe they did it. and if that isn't the best way to get AIDS. you did not kill off sasuke, did you? i won't believe it! and how cool. i wish there woulda been more deidara what with how the manga is going and whatnot. but i'm glad you came up with an ending. that's the hardest part about a dang story. you come up with an idea, but no ending. i almost feel really bad for sasuke, cuz i think he just wants naruto to stick around for five minutes. and naruto is so intent on going out there by himself and now look what happened to sasuke.

if he's dead, i shall not forgive you. i shall avenge his death! woot. i hope you are inspired enough to keep updating!

-ras
schedule July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I've just re-read this. WOW, this is really good, please keep it up!!! And if Sasuke dies, so will you! He, I get a bit carried away, sorry.
person lo
schedule July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am glad that you are working on this again. It was a nice chapter but it lacked any transitions from event to event things just seemed to pop up and happen.