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July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yeah welcome back to the world of writing . . . yes, I know I can't say anything can I? Great chapter, they finally have one another and this happens? Wow, talk about some bad karma . . . those two are trouble magnets aren't they? Oh no Sasuke! That sucks, just get some loving and then get stabbed. Oh yuck did Itamaru (hee, hee) watch them while they were loving? Well I'll take a stab at what you meant (oh that was a bad pun) did you mean that Naruto was going to kill Itachi, that he was worried that Sasuke would not love him anymore if he took his brother's life when Sasuke was determined to be the one to kill him for the clans revenge?
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July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Crap, just me again. I put my email on that thing and it hide it . . . well here it is: littleolmee2002@yahoo.com
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July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
first of all, woot! wall sex! *celebrates and loves on* and omg! that wall sex... so hot! and seme!naruto is like... *droolz*
*coughs* okay. now that that's out of my system. dayum woman. what an update. when you come back to play, you come back playing hard. wow. the action, the desperation, the passion that just flowed through this chapter was palpable with every word. i couldn't stop reading when i started because i could feel the tension in everyone, i could feel the way sasuke was desperately seeking naruto, searching to make sure that he was okay, that he wasn't hurt, that his naruto was still okay.
and when naruto and sasuke were together, not even having sex, when sasuke was trying to persuade naruto to understand him, to stay with him, i was just moved by the emotion that was in sasuke's character. the way he reached out for naruto and begged him to just stay, i wanted to cry for him, because he wouldn't do it himself.
sasuke and naruto are both far too stubborn to get things done properly. they would never come right out and beg and plead and cry for the other to do something, so their actions in this chapter were made a lot more touching simply because of their pigheadedness. for naruto and sasuke to both realize that they might not come back to each other, that this could be the only chance that they have to be together, and it's really sad, but really good.
and damnit! sasuke! how could you? *hiss* don't kill sasuke! *weeps* you know my first guess and that was wrong and that makes me sad... now i have to try to figure out what the hell naruto's getting ready to do... i'm sure it has something to do with killing itachi, but i could be wrong... *goes off to corner to ponder*
great update darling! i'm looking forward to the next one and hope it's out soon.
much love!
~hanyou-elf
*coughs* okay. now that that's out of my system. dayum woman. what an update. when you come back to play, you come back playing hard. wow. the action, the desperation, the passion that just flowed through this chapter was palpable with every word. i couldn't stop reading when i started because i could feel the tension in everyone, i could feel the way sasuke was desperately seeking naruto, searching to make sure that he was okay, that he wasn't hurt, that his naruto was still okay.
and when naruto and sasuke were together, not even having sex, when sasuke was trying to persuade naruto to understand him, to stay with him, i was just moved by the emotion that was in sasuke's character. the way he reached out for naruto and begged him to just stay, i wanted to cry for him, because he wouldn't do it himself.
sasuke and naruto are both far too stubborn to get things done properly. they would never come right out and beg and plead and cry for the other to do something, so their actions in this chapter were made a lot more touching simply because of their pigheadedness. for naruto and sasuke to both realize that they might not come back to each other, that this could be the only chance that they have to be together, and it's really sad, but really good.
and damnit! sasuke! how could you? *hiss* don't kill sasuke! *weeps* you know my first guess and that was wrong and that makes me sad... now i have to try to figure out what the hell naruto's getting ready to do... i'm sure it has something to do with killing itachi, but i could be wrong... *goes off to corner to ponder*
great update darling! i'm looking forward to the next one and hope it's out soon.
much love!
~hanyou-elf
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July 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap, I think my eyes just popped out of my head, and all I can say is WTF!!! LOL, That was completely unexpected. Hawt and tragic and a complete shock, both because of the fact that it was an update O.O XD, and what happened in it O.o. Hooray for NaruSasu smexiness and completely crazy developments. Now I really need to see what the hell is going to happen from here.
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May 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I must say I am really loving this one. It really pulls you into the story line. It has become one of my top three favorites, including Chasing Naruto, Spiral Fall, and now this one. Not in any specific order though. I cannot wait until the next installment on this one! Keep up the wonderful work.
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May 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I haven't checked this fic in a few months and I return to find a couple of updates. I can't wait to see Sakura and Akira react to Sasuke and Naruto's relationship. I also love how their romance has a instant connection, sorta like soul mates. I hope to see more soon.
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May 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Its about time that there was smut in this story!!!!!!!! I've only just read all the chapters in one night and I was starting to get rather frustrated!!!!!!(hehe^.^) Besides that the story is absolutly wonderful!!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait for the next chapters!!!!! Can you put me on the list to tell me you update?????????
Kepp up the good work!!!!!!!!
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April 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwww... I love this story and I hope it gets its conclusion some day. Thank you much for the smut!
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April 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Uuaahh! A cliffie! O__O This fic is absolutely wonderful! I hope you will continue with this. Will be waiting patiently. Thanks so much for sharing. :)
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April 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*cheers* i'm just working my way through the stories slowly, but steadily. bwah ha ha! okay...
you know... i think i might love you. *plots kidnapping demise* this chapter... damn! i'm so glad that sasuke's okay, it's a relief (but kind of something we knew would happen since it is an eventual smut story and all... ) damn. the sense of anxiety as we awaited sasuke's awakening, the anguish we felt with naruto over sasuke's unconsciousness, his anger with everyone around him who refused to help him. his anger with neji... (how hot would it have been for naruto to have thrown him against the nearest wall and proven his dominance?) and his belief in sasuke. all beautiful, poignant things that help add a heightened level of emotion to this story.
the creativity behind it is beautiful. you write with such poetic expertise that it blows me away each time i click on one of your stories. i'm always impressed with your work. your characterization is amazing. your plots are always so deep and thick and twisting that one can't help but become engrossed within them. and your smut... so hot!
and you know, as much as i want to read naru/sasu smut (best way to have them, btw. naru-seme ahoy!) i like that it was just that little bit. i think a full out smut scene would have been far too quick for them. they needed the slow pace, and now sasuke has something to look forward to. ne?
this was a great update. you did a beautiful job and i can't wait for the next one. *i'm late, i know. but... forgive me? .:puppy eyes:.*
ja!
~hanyou-elf
you know... i think i might love you. *plots kidnapping demise* this chapter... damn! i'm so glad that sasuke's okay, it's a relief (but kind of something we knew would happen since it is an eventual smut story and all... ) damn. the sense of anxiety as we awaited sasuke's awakening, the anguish we felt with naruto over sasuke's unconsciousness, his anger with everyone around him who refused to help him. his anger with neji... (how hot would it have been for naruto to have thrown him against the nearest wall and proven his dominance?) and his belief in sasuke. all beautiful, poignant things that help add a heightened level of emotion to this story.
the creativity behind it is beautiful. you write with such poetic expertise that it blows me away each time i click on one of your stories. i'm always impressed with your work. your characterization is amazing. your plots are always so deep and thick and twisting that one can't help but become engrossed within them. and your smut... so hot!
and you know, as much as i want to read naru/sasu smut (best way to have them, btw. naru-seme ahoy!) i like that it was just that little bit. i think a full out smut scene would have been far too quick for them. they needed the slow pace, and now sasuke has something to look forward to. ne?
this was a great update. you did a beautiful job and i can't wait for the next one. *i'm late, i know. but... forgive me? .:puppy eyes:.*
ja!
~hanyou-elf