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April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ZOMG! I love it! I can't wait for more!! Please update soon!!!
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April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh.My.God. When i first clicked on this, i wasnt expecting much. (No offense, just not usually my thing.) And yet im reviewing, after nearly four hours of reading the whole thing, on perhaps my new favourite story! I love the whole idea so far of this, and i really enjoy your writing style! Please update soon, i really wanna know where this is gonna go!
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April 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah. Yes. I read this at work. Haha. I got paid to read this. Um anyway, so... despite the angst. I can't even handle that. *sigh* Naruto is leaving!!! I do not envy the work required for future chapters if there's a big ol' battle coming. Action can be soooo difficult to write, but I trust you completely with whatever you want to do. I sitll think it's fascinating the idea of Oro finally getting his hands on *cough* Itachi's body. I mean that would be Oro's ultimate goal. It'll be interesting to see how Sasuke interacts with said Itachi!Oro without fainting all over the place.
Mmm. I was really touched by the moments with Naruto, but omg I kept confusing this Naruto with the one in kitsune no yomeiri. gah that just means you should update this story more often *pokes* oh but dude. dude................. the narusasu moment. wow. yay. i'm glad they took that step further. and i liked it better that they didn't go "all the way." honestly i have become so pr0ned out lately that i prefer a slower pace. so take your time really. i'd like things to settle down and then they go at it like rabbits >.< who can think about full out sex when itachi's out there somewhere wanting naruto and gaara and then maybe after sasuke? but still. i really liked the detail of naruto brushing his hand down to sasuke's knee. i just thought... that was easy to picture, romantic and just... this sasuke here is so fragile it seems. or maybe vulnerable? that i love naruto being that rock sasuke needs. and like sasuke, i just don't want naru to go away at all. i just want them to stay in bed, listen to rain falling against the window and occasionally have naruto say random things like "do you think it makes much sense that in order to get the sharingan you have to save your friend but in order to get mangekyou sharingan you have to kill them? what the hell is the point of that?!?" (honestly that took me 10 minutes to come up with)
mm and you know what else i miss? Naruto's village. I hope that we get a chance to revisit there. I just loved the way you described it. Yes, and thank you for always telling me you updated. I just don't come here as often as I used to, so I would have probably missed it :(
*hugs*
Mmm. I was really touched by the moments with Naruto, but omg I kept confusing this Naruto with the one in kitsune no yomeiri. gah that just means you should update this story more often *pokes* oh but dude. dude................. the narusasu moment. wow. yay. i'm glad they took that step further. and i liked it better that they didn't go "all the way." honestly i have become so pr0ned out lately that i prefer a slower pace. so take your time really. i'd like things to settle down and then they go at it like rabbits >.< who can think about full out sex when itachi's out there somewhere wanting naruto and gaara and then maybe after sasuke? but still. i really liked the detail of naruto brushing his hand down to sasuke's knee. i just thought... that was easy to picture, romantic and just... this sasuke here is so fragile it seems. or maybe vulnerable? that i love naruto being that rock sasuke needs. and like sasuke, i just don't want naru to go away at all. i just want them to stay in bed, listen to rain falling against the window and occasionally have naruto say random things like "do you think it makes much sense that in order to get the sharingan you have to save your friend but in order to get mangekyou sharingan you have to kill them? what the hell is the point of that?!?" (honestly that took me 10 minutes to come up with)
mm and you know what else i miss? Naruto's village. I hope that we get a chance to revisit there. I just loved the way you described it. Yes, and thank you for always telling me you updated. I just don't come here as often as I used to, so I would have probably missed it :(
*hugs*
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April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter! I really like how you have handled this story. It is well written, well put together and, just a breath of fresh air when so many people that write don't care enough to spell check of take a grammer lesson. It is always nice to see someone that cares to post something worth reading. Great job!
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April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was HOT!!!! Please update soon! =^^=
Koneko-chan
Koneko-chan
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April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! An update - SQUEE!! I love this story, but had kind of forgotten about it for a minute. I'm so glad you didn't, and Aww XD we got a little romance and a little smut XD. Thanks for the update, and if there's anything that can be done to make Rasengan22 feel better, I'd be glad to try and help. I hate when any of you get sick or feel bad, cause you all seem like such wonderful people, it makes me sad.
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April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was sweet! Please continue!!
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April 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dude, dude. ZOMG. Dude. I just got your note on DA. And gah I have to go to work on freaking Easter, so I'm emailin' it to myself and I'll review when I get home ;p
But I didn't want you to think I'm some right unappreciative bastard. XD XD I still just... LOVE this story to itty bitty bits. I'm glad you haven't forgotten. Be prepared for an extremely loooooong review later. *chu*
But I didn't want you to think I'm some right unappreciative bastard. XD XD I still just... LOVE this story to itty bitty bits. I'm glad you haven't forgotten. Be prepared for an extremely loooooong review later. *chu*
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April 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Finaly! You've updated! *eyes twitch* I can't believe you going to make Sasuke go threw such emotionaly torture! Can you really be so cruel, *thinks it over* Nevermind, we all have our own cruel streak XD! Please update soon!!
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April 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! I think it is really cool what you've done with Orotachi, creepy, but cool!! Naruto and Sasuke are so sweet together the way you right them!! Gah! I like how they are both so hesitant with each other and how they always seem to gravitate toward each other. And the smut was hot too!!!
/much love!!
/much love!!