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Your stories are always interesting and great to read! You left a "you" out, I think, when Neji asks Naruto why he was sticking up for Sasuke.

Do the hula? As in from the Lion King? Either way it made me giggle. I await the next chapter.

I actually read this chapter weeks ago when it was updated but I haven’t had the chance to review it yet and I would just like to say that that was certainly an interesting chapter. I really like the way you portrayed Naruto’s and Gaara’s friendship. In past chapters Gaara seemed to be in love with Naruto, and I positively hate love triangles. However, it’s easy to see after this chapter that Gaara was merely concerned for his best friend. Lovely twist to the story too, finally bringing Itachi into the picture that is. Can I fancy a guess as to what the deal was with the “two voices, one body” thing? I think that Itachi and Orrochimaru are either fused together or Orrochimaru took over Itachi’s body, but Itachi’s mainly in control of the body. I suppose though I’ll just have to wait and see until the next chapter(s) to find out what the real answer is though.

Oh, and I would just like to apologize for pestering you about updating this story. It wasn’t right to put pressure on you or hassle you about it and I’m sorry if I was a bit of a jerk. I hope I didn’t annoy you too much. My best wishes for you and your writing.

fan of "Casablanca"? I hate Neji in thia fic; it does seem in character for him, though. I love how Naruto declared his love for Sasuke to Gaara. It seems like Gaara wasn't too happy to hear it. lol. Keep writing and I'll keep reading.^^

You updated!! Yay!! I love this story!

“Of all the blacksmiths, in all the towns, in all the world, he had to walk into mine.” OMG, I got a kick out of that one!!!

I love Bogey!! Can't wait to see what happens next!!

hey! sorry i havent reviewed the last few chappies...i love this story and i wish to be added to the email alert list..my email is shadowfax_00@hotmail.com...hope you update soon! bye for now :P

Thank you, thank you, thank you! You have no idea how happy I am to see this fic updated. *sighs* And it was very well done too. I enjoyed Neji. He had a different flair to him. He was very individualistic... maybe a very strongly anti-Sasuke individual but an individual all the same. XD Great way to bring back the Fox game; that was a very nice touch. Itachi and (I'm guessing) Orochimaru was a surprise. I didn't even see that coming. LOL But very, very nice addition. Everything overall was very, very good, and I'm glad that you're ready to finish this up. It'll definitely lighten the load that you have piling up there... *sweat drops* Well, I think that I've said everything that I wanted to say, so I'll just end this here. I hope that the plot bunnies for this story inhibit your dreams and give you an adequate dose of inspiration for this fic, and if they want, then they can also inspire you with tons of ideas for your other fics as well! Have a good night~

Let the Rain Fall,
EndlessxRain

Love this story! I know you on devart, thats how I found you here. I am so happy that you finally updated and would love it if you could email me about new chapters to any of your stories. Thanks! -DirewolfLilith, devart or km1429@txstate.edu

more more more more more more more!!!!!!!!! Hope that Sasuke will get up in the next chapter!!

LOVELY!!! I was so happy when i saw you updated and this was a very good chapter so i feel it was worth the wait. hopefully, the next update will be soon!

omg! *squee* you updated this story and it's amazing! you do a wonderful job with anything you ever create. you're an amazing story teller, you prove your prowess with teh written word with each story you compose, with everything you share with other people. i love your naruto is this story, he's so vulnerable and yet so strong. and sasuke, you're sasuke is amazing. i don't know what to say about this story. you've got an amazing talent and i'm so glad that you share it with us. you're a wonderful story teller and i love it when you update.

and so long! it took so long to get this update, but honestly, the wait was so worth it. it's an amazing story, and you do a great job with it. and i'm so thrilled you've finally updated it (exasperated! but enthralled)

great job, keep it up!
~hanyou-elf