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Yes!! Finally!!! I've loved this story for a while, and I especially love Naru POVs. Okay, so I read this at work and now I'm at home for meh dinner break and going to review cause that's how much I love you *squish*

So, lots of stuff happened in this chapter, you made it move pretty quickly here while establishing new information and getting into more of Naruto's feelings for Sasuke (my favorite part). Aww, and I really love when Naruto is good with kids so when he helped those kids with their kunai lesson, awww. Hm. But now I wonder what the deal is with Itachi/Oro, for a second, I was like what the hell is Zetsu doing there because of the two voices and all. Hm, and LOL I feel bad for Sasuke even though he CAN be a jerk, but he always gets beaten up and then passes out. That's alright, maybe Naruto can wake him up with, you know, a pelvic thrust or something. Hehe.

I looooooove it. I don't want you to abandon this story ever again like that. I will stalk you down everywhere and so yeah. There. Take that. It was lovely. And I really like the way you write this story. It feels... really easy to read, and sometime's the author inserts too much of their voice and it gets distracting, but this is just right whatever it is you're doing, plus I like the flow of it... the way the dialogue works with the physical description and so on and so forth... I just like stories written like that. MORE. I want more now.

A wonderful chapter. I really like this story, you're really doing something that requires some thought. It is a nice change from the norm around this site. I can't wait to see more.

Wow, I totally did a double take in the Latest menu, that was an awesome surprise. Great chapter, it's like you never stopped. I love all the wrenched out confessions, I always want to hug the character and congratulate them for saying what they mean, because for some odd reason people hardly ever do. Lol on the nod to Casablanca, that was funny even after the warning and I love that he was sitting drinking the orange juice at the table. Oh and Konohamaru and "The cutie with the hottie" SO Kawaii. What the hell's up with Itachi, I never wopuld have put old Oro down for cohabitation, this should be interesting, sucks to be Sasuke though, the two people he hates the most just joined forces, and laid a badass double whammy on him. I'm glad Naruto took the news so well, if I remember correctly Sasuke was anxious about that. Glad to see you came back to wrap this up, it's really hard to come back and finish things like this, so big props to you for that.

okay, you got me: hook, line and sinker. And now that i've admitted this, could you pleeeeaaaassssse put up the next chapter? There, you made me beg! happy?!

okay, you got me: hook, line and sinker. And now that i've admitted this, could you pleeeeaaaassssse put up the next chapter? There, you made me beg! happy?!

It's 2:16 in the morning and I've finally finnished reading you story!! Yay!!! ^^ Anyway I totally love it!!! Sasuke confessed but what does Naruto think? I hope he loves him to...I really liked that re-write of that lulluby!!(sp?) Anyways I would luv you forever if you would update real soon!!!!!!!!

-Jason

I'm lov'n the story (the bit with "Nobody move" nice) I want to read more... so please post more (SMUT of the NaruSasuNaru type) PLEASE, thank you

I loved it I espeacially loved the sweet lullabye! I made three backgroundswith it right away Iwasso inspired! I am afraid that the bestone came from changing the name to naru rather than sasuke but the pic was begging for it!

argh i hate agust!!! i love fluff mpreg thou XD they just so sweet!!!

Um the lullaby was both both cheesy and sweet at the same time, my my what ever would Mr. Emo Sasuke do with out Naruto? hm any way nice update, keeping it coming yeah?