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November 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Was Naruto really going to use Sasuke? That does not seem like something Naruto would do to anyone, even less to a friend. Poor Sasuke, crushing so hard and then this...oh. Mmm...I like the way you end it and I agree that angst is good for a story but too much just makes me suffer along the characters and I dont like that. I already have enough of it in my life to be seeing it in my fantasy world. Anyway, please update soon!
Carla
Carla
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November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Waiiii!!!!
That was just too cute. So far I am really enjoying the fic...it's got a good plot, some fun quirks on our favorite characters, and still manages to keep everyone on topic and for the most part in character. While I will admit some of Sasuke's actions are a bit, uh, questionable, it's adorable to watch him being all angst-y. A few technical errors, but that's easily forgotten while reading and becoming absorbed in the story. Good stuff.
Keep typin'
That was just too cute. So far I am really enjoying the fic...it's got a good plot, some fun quirks on our favorite characters, and still manages to keep everyone on topic and for the most part in character. While I will admit some of Sasuke's actions are a bit, uh, questionable, it's adorable to watch him being all angst-y. A few technical errors, but that's easily forgotten while reading and becoming absorbed in the story. Good stuff.
Keep typin'
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November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, the way you re-worded the MockingBird Lulliby was really creative!! Loved it. =P
Can't wait for the next chapter, I'm really loving this story, keep it up!
KnT
Can't wait for the next chapter, I'm really loving this story, keep it up!
KnT
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November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So frikkin cute, ack. I love that little lullaby. very cute and a nice adaptation.
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November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I loved the lullaby, I sent it to my husband (cause hes a weirdo and is positive he is a ninja) and he will probably be sining it to our kids right now! HAHHAHAHA anyhoo, that was really good, kinda curious about what is going on with Naruto but suspence is good, so is posting! Ill be waiting ^_^.
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November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wah~ so sweet... its very touching~ I am throughly excited with whatever plans Naruto and Gaara has... what is their plan?! hurry update soon pls~~~
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November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That one way to calm down the Uchiha. Very cute :D
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November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
“Hush, little Sasuke, don’t say a word. Daddy’s gonna give you a summoning bird. And if that summoning bird doesn’t fight, daddy’s gonna buy you a sharp kunai. And if that sharp kunai doesn’t pierce, daddy will protect you, strong and fierce. Should daddy fall, no need to cry. You’ll be a strong ninja by and by…”
........That. Was. So. Cu~te. ^x^ I couldn't stop laughing. I just assumed that Sasuke was struck speeches when Naruto started singing it. Definetly broke the ice well. Good job.
ummm, from what you said at the end, your reviewers not digging too much of the angst, well.......from the angst stories that I've been reading lately, I have to say that I agree with them. So many are filled will sick material that make you wanna vomit. (It's more of a violent, Gore without Plots that I've come across) But yeah, yours is great. I haven't had to worry about grabbing a puke bucket of anything. Aren't you proud?
I agree that the chapter was short, but not at all rushed. So it worked very well. And besides, atleast you do update. I lost my lastest chapter from Distractions (over 15,000 words) by accidently deleting it from my computer (and I had no other backup)and so I restarted it by rewriting the chapter (one with over 12,000 words)....ONLY to want to restart that chapter b/c I don't like it. In other words, the last time that I updated my story was the week before school started back in August. Isn't that horrible? T^T Now I feel like crying.
Good luck with your next chapter ^.^
~Ria ^_~
........That. Was. So. Cu~te. ^x^ I couldn't stop laughing. I just assumed that Sasuke was struck speeches when Naruto started singing it. Definetly broke the ice well. Good job.
ummm, from what you said at the end, your reviewers not digging too much of the angst, well.......from the angst stories that I've been reading lately, I have to say that I agree with them. So many are filled will sick material that make you wanna vomit. (It's more of a violent, Gore without Plots that I've come across) But yeah, yours is great. I haven't had to worry about grabbing a puke bucket of anything. Aren't you proud?
I agree that the chapter was short, but not at all rushed. So it worked very well. And besides, atleast you do update. I lost my lastest chapter from Distractions (over 15,000 words) by accidently deleting it from my computer (and I had no other backup)and so I restarted it by rewriting the chapter (one with over 12,000 words)....ONLY to want to restart that chapter b/c I don't like it. In other words, the last time that I updated my story was the week before school started back in August. Isn't that horrible? T^T Now I feel like crying.
Good luck with your next chapter ^.^
~Ria ^_~
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November 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Again... here in Anna's place
She says that she loves this chapter and is glad that you got angst out of the way. The lullaby was great and how they ended up curled against each other was so cute. She can't wait for the next chapter
She says that she loves this chapter and is glad that you got angst out of the way. The lullaby was great and how they ended up curled against each other was so cute. She can't wait for the next chapter
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November 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You of course know that I demand that you update!! bwahahahaha its soo good please update soon pweety pweease!