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I like it. It was easy to get into this at first and now I can't wait for the next update!

ah, that was cute. and i could so totally picutre sasuke cussing like a sailor! that was good. can't wait for the next chapter!

-inc

Nice job, a lot of drama in this last chapter. Well done.

Really loving this story, it gets better as each chapter is updated. I reall hope to read more soon.

Ahh...Naruto is soo soo soo cute. He cant even describe his *friendship* with Sasuke. God, that is going to be a hard one. I do *request* a happy ending. (nods head and waves fist in the air) Sasuke has to get his fox and stop being so sad. You made Sasuke *cry*! Oh God! Please, no more Uchiha tears and if he must cry they better be happy tears. Ok, is Gaara feeling something other than friendylike towards the blonde or is he just feeling left out with Sasuke and Naruto's closeness? For a moment there I could have sworn that he felt like something similar to love for Naruto but then he realized that Naruto felt more than friendship with the teme and totally changed his attitude. Oh well, please update soon! Wonderful chapter, I loved it even if I did find it a little short.

Carla

Goodness gracious, how interesting. Although I do absolutely love angst, I'm glad that you've decided to tone it down a bit from this point on and include a little more action. The angst was actually starting to make the story suffer by taking away from the great plot line you have as opposed to adding to it. I would say that the delightful mix of angst and action you had in your story before Gaara and his siblings arrived was perfect. The action kept the story moving and exciting and the angst (especially the cute parts) kept the story engaging and tender.

However, this is not to say that the chapters with Gaara in them are terrible, quite the opposite really. I am more so just agreeing with your choice in direction for the oncoming chapters.

Although it may be a little late to give my opinion on the matter, I would really prefer it if there wasn’t a love triangle. Love triangles always leave me feeling bad for the person who didn’t get to be with the one they were in love with, and I’ve found that in certain situations, love triangles take away from a story as opposed to adding to it, and it is my firm belief that this is one of those situations. However, the choice of course is yours in this matter. I will continue to read “Here’s to the Fox” regardless, I just thought I’d give a little input on what this reader feels about that subject. My best wishes for you and your writing.


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I love it... it brings tears to my eyes and i dunno if im gonna be happy that its so realistic and the way u developed their relationship or cry bcoz its so angsty... but hey.. that's the way it goes so if it weren't there, it wouldnt be the story that i have came to love. Im glad i found this story. Keep it up with the wonderful updates. The story is so heartwrenchingly true and sweet with a right amount of angstyness that must be present in a war torn land and messed up pasts... YAY~! :D

Loving the orginality of this lil plot bunny. Cant wait to see where it goes, and Im seriously looking forward to the next chappie

*Lifts a wine cooler and yells* CHEERS!

A good story doesn't need action. I'm really happy with the chapters so far ^.~

Let Sasuke and Naruto live in peace a little longer XD I love fluff *gg*

Gaara is completly fine by me!
Even if I totally hate angst, as I think I pointed out before, I'm looking forward to how you're going to write it. I go hope that it doesn't last more than 2 chapter though, I tend to get deppresed after that...
And I'm really looking forward to the halloween special!
I liked this chapter, Naruto is a complete dobe indeed, he can't see how Sasuke feels, and can't see how he feels about Sasuke either.
"Yeah and I'm the Wind Lord's wife" I was laughing so hard with that, it was genious!!
Wow I beleive this is the longest review I ever written...