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Just wanted to know....is this story still on to be completed? Who are you putting Naruto with? Neji maybe??

Just read chapter 5 ...this isn't really yaoi at all. I think I would call it a fluffy love story for girls with a hint of shonen-ai. In Somnium, Aveo Captore and Machi Yoko Naruto are my two FAVORITES!!! :) Just love them both and looking forward to how they develop!! :)

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Aaaaah! I usually hate stories that are alternate-reality-but-still-in-the-Narutoverse based. But this one is excellent! I guess because you didn't change the past or have them relive the past, I hate that. Anyway, what's going to happen? Who will be evil? Probably his dad or something, or probably someone we won't expect, eh? Well, you must update soon because this is the best thing I've read in a while!

--Laura

I just read the whole thing. I’m not a very big fan of Sasuke/Naruto pairing but the whole Uchiha having a crush on Naruto that was good. I do love Hinata/Sasuke pairing. I also like the way you portrayed Hinata, Kakashi & Itachi here too. I love this story, the whole plot line and everything.

I hope you write more stories. With Hianta/Sasuke pairing.

Amazing, amazing work. I was absolutely blown away by how well you matched everything and made it so believable once he realized that his "wish" had come true.
I can't wait for more. :3

As soon as you said "Not a sasunaru fic" I hightailed it out of there.Are you happy I wasted a good two hours on this?

i am in love with this story. sigh. it makes me happy. especially with all the gore... but i'll move away from that subject. anyway, great chapter. though i agree with sasuke about not wanting to see naruto touch orochimaru that way.... ewwww. oh well, i'm glad kyuubi made a very strong appearance in here and he wasn't all evil, cause he's definitely one of my facorite characters. even if he's a big ass human eating fox, he still kicks ass. anywho, can't wait until the next chapter.

-inc

I think this is interesting, I'm going to read it!

holy mother f* jesus on white bread, that was... hell, i don't know. i was hesitant to read this at first because of the summary, but i read a lot of your other stories and loved them, so i had to give this one a look at. i am so glad that i did. this is absolutely amazing. actually, amazing doesn't cut it. and i'm not just being nice. i'm completely serious. i've never read anything like this before and i don't think i ever will, unless its something else you write. i can't wait until they kill that bastard... and i hope something happens to sakura. whether good or bad, i want to see her. what do you have in store for her? at first, i didn't like the idea of sasuke and hinata, and i'm still a bit iffy on it, but i'll get over it. BUT only if naruto gets to be happy, even if its not with sasuke. at the moment though, i don't really care about pairings. i just want to see 'the Uchiha' get his fucking head cut off... maybe his heart cut out as well. okay, i think i've said enough... even though i just rambled. anyway, i love this story... can't get enough of it. so i hope you update soon.

-inc

p.s. i'm glad that itachi and sasuke get along... the way you portray their relationship is completely realistic and not fake at all. can't wait for more brotherly love(in a non incest way) :)