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Ok, I can do this. I can read a story with Sasuke and Hinata as a couple. Why? Cause I am enjoying the story so far. And now that I have ranted(sorta),I've gotten over it. All will be good. Keep up the AWESOME work!

omg I just find this fic and its at a cliffhanger??? Noooooooooos!....and ok I am not a SasuHina fan but oddly enough youve made it work and I like this fic, and I soo dont want naruto to be loenly, I want others to treat him right, for him to get his confidence back, for Sandaime, Kakashi and Iruka to love him like they do the other naruto..and yeeeeessssssss they get to kill the ebil bastid Sasuke together Yay! Oh I dont like that one at all...and poor poor Naru his virginty taken by HIM??? urrrggkkk uuuugghh, gonna be sick, ok ok enough babbling for me, Im half asleep stayed up late to read your fic, but tired now, update soon please?? ty ty ty for the wonderful read, huggles and smiles Mija

gah, I missed the updtes again stupid, albeit lovely- yaoi webcomics...mmm...yaoi...^^ But I have to say...Hinata is a /deviant/, I don't know if i've ever liked her so much! Now if only some of the guys were more like her...^_^ I still adore how this whole mixture of the characters keeps me guessing with the pairings, and it was way suprising when it turned out that Sasuke(the good one) was the one with feelings for her. *sigh* I guess this means no deliciously sinful paths to getting the former rivals hooked up...^-^ and the part with Kabuto, I wasn't sure whether to gawk at the screen, love Sasuke's manipulation, or laugh/smirk at Kabuto. Most of all though, I'm wondering at Sasuke's double...He didn't seem like the type to let him win, plus, having a bit of a sense of what snake bastard's like, I thought for sure he'd have come in to stop them some how, or at least have a way to watch his 'minions'...it almost makes me nervous.^^; Alas though, I may have to stop for the troubles of delayed housework are calling me, and I /don't/ like the look of that moving spot...^^;; till the next chapter!

I'm confused. Who exactly are the couples of this fic? Is it just that in this world there are these couples, but if/when he returns to his own he goes after someone else?

This is a good story and all... but I think you might need to move this to another section. Usually people come to the M/M parts expecting the lead couple to BE just that, M/M. Your story would be better suited in the 'general' or 'AU' section I'd assume. Great story, but wrong section. ^^

Ok, Sasuke and Hinata together is creeping me out. What about Naruto?

Luv ur story! And Luv SasuHina, the should have some 'private time' together ^^
Update soon!

Nice, i know this'll be a good story. ^.~

buuut..i'm confused..is this now a Yaoi (sasunaru ?) story or SasuHina ? I like both..for me it doesn't matter.. but it's very confusing at the moment where this is going.. erm..nervermind ^.^

Maybe I should get on more often so I don't miss chapters...^^' Anyway though, this is a pretty interesting development, I mean, hinata+sasuke=love?? Not to mention the whole KabutoxSakura spy thing. *shivers* I agree with what Sasuke said, scary image. It's nice to see Sasu-kun has an ally in all this so far, it sounds like he's in for trouble.....

This is evolving into a completely awesome story!^^ We had a NaruxSasu kiss /and/ the new twist with a Sasuke 'clone'..... And I nearly fell over laughing at Sasuke's 'sexy-no-jutsu', i've been waiting for a good story with it. *laughs again* It seems like it'll be fun to see how the new Shikamaru x Ino pairing will end up, not to mention the new the-alternate-Sasuke-worked-for-Orochimaru plot. It kind of makes me wonder... will they fight? And which will win? Especially since it seems that the alternate Sasuke never trained with Kakashi and didn't have the friendships that strengthend the first Sasuke. whoops, I think I may have gone on too long.^^;; But one more thing I wanted to say, those interludes, "Uchiha Sasuke, just your average fifteen-year-old…whose entire life has been turned upside down. He is the puppet, the marionette dancing on strings. The puppeteer laughs, making him dance ever faster. What happens when the strings snap? The lines between friendship and love blur, and discoveries are made. Hating himself, and fate, the young man’s heart sees double..." I really like those, they give this a nice touch... Well, Ja ne until your next chapter.^_^