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Holy shit, that was gorgeous and stunning and heart breaking. Beautifully written.

I can't believe this only has 20 reviews it's like the best with all that depth and emotion I loved the way it was written it didn't make me cry but it did touch me gets me everytime I read it and it's one of the few stories I could read again and again, it was beautiful and intense and I loved the part when kakashi yelled at Sasuke and told him he didn't need his help after that mission you write the emotion so that the reader really feels like it's them right there in the moment an award winner if it could get an award. Bravo!

I do very much like this fic. :)
Well thought out, well written, and well edited.

Oh wow, this was fantastic!! I will tell you now that I have read everything you've written on here so far (except the Gaara/Naruto one, which I am saving to read last!) and I am sooo impressed. You write them all so well. This story especially stuck with me... I agree with what you wrote at the beginning, about being sort of picky about Kaka Sasu stories. And I think you did a beautiful job of them, you have such a great grasp of the dynamics of their characters. I know this was a one-shot but I think you could turn this into a really amazing multi-(or even two/three-)chapter story... the complexities of their relationship really piqued my curiosity and I know you could describe it so well. Or maybe you should just write more Kaka Sasu in general? Heh. I just think you have a great skill at it.

i'll say you should be proud of it. i've read it more than a few times now, even though i usually think this pairing is full of bollocks since most of them are bad and creepy and take place when sasuke was like 12, eww. but this is good and i get that awesome little twist in my stomach when i read it. it is lacking in porn but i think thats a good thing it wouldn't have fit the tone. too many people seem to think just cause it's adult fanfiction that there has to be lots of rampant sex but this is adult in that it's realistic and brutal and just fucking good. also i love the way it's written with the little snippets that twist together and tell you everything you need/want to know.
i loved it. i also greatly enjoyed the rest of your stories but this one leaves a particular taste i'm not sure why. thank you for writing something worth reading and remembering

Love your story..! ^^

Best Kakashi/Sasuke related fic ever seen by my eyes...
I don't think I've got enough words to say how much I loved this damn fic!
Everythign is perfectly placed, the ideas, the words... But most of all, it's incredible how you delved in the personality of such difficult characters, taking them to new situations but still maintaining their thinking schemes perfectly.
It's the first fic I read of all yours and I'm SO going to go over the whole stuff right away!!!
In sum, you are an awsome writer ^________^

This. This is brilliant, and beautiful, and it actually made me cry. I've still got goosebumps from the ending. It's got to be the best KakaSasu fic I've ever read, and one of the best stories I've ever read, period, fanfiction or otherwise. The language just slayed me, killed me dead, and the feeling running through the whole thing left me feeling wrung out and exhausted and overwhelmed. Amazing. I have the urge to throw out all my WIPs and just stop writing altogether XD because this is perfect, and IC, and angsty as it has to be, considering the pairing, and I love it sooo much. I'm still sniffling a little XD Thank you for writing this!

Oh, wow. *stands in awe of you, blinking and staring*. You are an incredibly eloquent writer. I loved this for a change! It was written like an epic novel. Could you, would you write an epic novel of Naruto?! Absolutely beautifully worded, unlike anything I have read yet. Very nice. Kakashi x Sasuke (THE best pairing EVER) Thanks for writing it! *glomps u with tears streaming from eyes*

That was... wow. I pride myself on my vast knowledge and skillful use of the English language, but this goes beyond description. It's amazing. Every time I've read a Kakashi and Sasuke pairing, something seems off... usually at least in part because people refuse to keep them in character. But reading this... I... I'm at a loss for words. Feel proud. Very proud. I very nearly cried when I finished reading... And I still haven't quite figured out what I'm trying to say. I love it. It was wow.