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November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I Luv it update soon and send me the next chapter it's Beloved701@hotmail.com
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October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, for a first attempt. It was a little rough around the edges, but a beta can help you clean it up. It was interesting, amusing and decently done smut. I also like the twist at the end, though it could have been worded better.
This is a good first story, something you should be proud of. I'll wait to see what happens next.
Good luck and keep writting.
Ruby Lips
This is a good first story, something you should be proud of. I'll wait to see what happens next.
Good luck and keep writting.
Ruby Lips
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October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHH!!!! I want more! That just drew me in automatically. I'm really looking forward to reading more. Hope you update soon.^^
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October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GAAAAAAAAAAAAA! you cant leave it there you must update whenever
you get the chance :)
you get the chance :)